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Title: Chapter 3: So...You Don't Trust Me? 21 Sep 2007 7:33 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I totally agree, Snape should be an actor. I love him! And I am loving this storey, it just getting really good.

    Author's Response: Hi!  Thanks for the review.  Maybe he’ll take to the stage after everything.  lol  Glad you’re enjoying this so far.  
Title: Chapter 3: So...You Don't Trust Me? 14 Sep 2007 12:11 am
Reviewer: Syllva (Signed) [Report This]
    Hah I can agree with your endnote for sure, and your writing is impressive. XD

    Author's Response: lol  Thanks for the review.  Enjoy!
Title: Chapter 3: So...You Don't Trust Me? 30 Jul 2007 3:16 pm
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    Very, very good. Again, I really love your Snape. I can't wait to see what happens next... sadly I have to leave for work, so I can't start the next chapter. Darn those cliffhangers!

    the boy who lived
    Should be capitalized. And possibly separated by dashes, although that's up to you.

    deatheaters
    Capitalized and two separate words.

    anyways
    Despite rampant misuse, there is no such word. The word you want is "anyway."

    Misspellings of canon words and names is always more irritating than any other misspellings or grammar problems. I once got crucified for misspelling "Krycek" on an X-Files mailing list... and it wasn't even in a fic!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review and thank you very much for the corrections.  I've got a beta now...YAY! and we're going back over all the chapters and fixing them.  I'll watch for those mistakes.  She's already fixed the 'Death Eaters' for me and probably others.  I'll go back and check now.  I had no idea anyways wasn't even a word!  Learn something new everyday.  :)

    Thanks and enjoy!

Title: Chapter 3: So...You Don't Trust Me? 28 Jul 2007 12:01 pm
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for explaining why there was no Order guard. It all makes sense now. I liked the interaction between Snape and Lupin. Both of them were very much in character.

    And now, Snape to the rescue...
Title: Chapter 3: So...You Don't Trust Me? 20 Jul 2007 4:46 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    You have some great lines in this story so far and this is only chapter three! I particularly liked this line: "move wolf, before I give into the temptation to make improvements to your face with my fist."

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