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Title: Chapter 6: What's in a Dream? 14 Sep 2007 3:49 am
Reviewer: Syllva (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter. Oh and I hate those kinds of dreams..haha, poor Harry.

    Author's Response:

    They're almost as bad as the dreams where you jolt awake thinking you're falling.  :)

    Glad you're enjoying the story.  

Title: Chapter 6: What's in a Dream? 21 Aug 2007 12:27 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    I enjoyed the interaction here. Harry's dream would have driven him to this interaction with Snape and should cause him to do a lot of soul searching later.

    I noticed this amusing mistake, that probably has been pointed out already:
    "Remus felt his heart sore." Should be "soar".

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  I'm glad you liked that.  I have to admit that chapters six thru nine were not my best work.  Not that I have much work to compare it with.  LOL  This is my first story ever.

    Oops!  I'll go fix that some time before Wed.  Thanks for catching that.  I can just imagine what everyone must be thinking.  Why would Remus' heart be sore?  LOL

     

Title: Chapter 6: What's in a Dream? 20 Jul 2007 5:57 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Pretty good chapter. I'm glad they made it back to Hogwarts and received treatment for thier wounds.

    Just a little point out: "Remus felt his heart sore". I think it should be "soar"

    One more suggestion- try separating dialouge into new paragraphs like so:

    "Hello," said Harry.

    "Hi," said Ron.

    It makes it easier to follow the speakers when thier words are fully seperated.

    Author's Response:

    Hey!   Thanks so much for the responses.  I'll definitely be careful in the future with the dialogue and the spelling.  Microsoft Word is great for spell checking but sore and soar just doesn't come up.  I'll have to watch that. 

     I was really nervous since I've never posted anything before but your reviews made me feel great!  Whew!


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