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Reviews For Word Up
It was nice to see Remus and I had to laugh at the image of Molly going head to head with Severus over where Harry was going to be staying. I can just see everyone's faces when the Burrow's wards were brought down so quickly. Excellent chapter!
Author's Response: Hi! I don’t have any other stories here yet because the only other one I have posted anywhere is a first war fic about Snape. It’s on fanfiction.net. I have the same name there, Validego, and both Word Up and Bad Ass (my other story) are there. Bad Ass is only three chapters but will be continued. I’d love to hear from you if you go over there to read it. Thanks! And enjoy!
I liked the impromptu lesson on wards and the fact that Harry is starting to feel a little more comfortable around Snape--and visa versa. Author's Response: Score! Thank you so much for hanging in there! I'm glad you liked the wards. I had no idea how they worked so I just kind of made that all up and I was worried someone was going to be like...woah! It clearly states on page 357 of such and such book that wards are created by the sacrifice of lemurs. LOL Let me know what you think of the next chapter! Enjoy!
please update soon Author's Response: You got it! Thanks
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I was waiting for your review actually. I've been careful to watch the length of the paragraphs and the dialogue spaces since you mentioned it. I like it much better this way too. Thanks. I'm especially glad to hear you like the story still. A few more chapters and then I promise...ACTION!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'll get them posted as fast as I can. Several are in the works right now and since I tend to write out of chronological order, they'll go faster when I get to later chaps that are already mostly written. I just realized though...this is going to be a looonnng story! Yikes! |
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