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Title: Chapter 10: Zap 13 Oct 2009 7:39 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    The whole wards business was excellent. I especially liked the whole matter of benign and malignant wards. I can most certainly guess one home that has a lot of malignant wards around it (cough--Malfoy Manor--cough).

    It was nice to see Remus and I had to laugh at the image of Molly going head to head with Severus over where Harry was going to be staying. I can just see everyone's faces when the Burrow's wards were brought down so quickly.

    Excellent chapter!
Title: Chapter 10: Zap 22 Sep 2007 2:13 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I love Snape's humor! He's so cute sometimes. When I fianly finnish reading this storey, I'm gonna go look for other stories of your's because I'm really enjoying this so far.

    Author's Response: Hi!  I don’t have any other stories here yet because the only other one I have posted anywhere is a first war fic about Snape.  It’s on fanfiction.net.  I have the same name there, Validego, and both Word Up and Bad Ass (my other story) are there.  Bad Ass is only three chapters but will be continued.  I’d love to hear from you if you go over there to read it.  Thanks!  And enjoy!
Title: Chapter 10: Zap 21 Aug 2007 2:58 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Yippee! No paragraphs that ate New York! ;-) And you are exactly right about the improvement in the writing. This flowed much smoother, less navel-gazing, and I had a feeling that there was more action, even if there wasn't really.

    I liked the impromptu lesson on wards and the fact that Harry is starting to feel a little more comfortable around Snape--and visa versa.

    Author's Response:

    Score!  Thank you so much for hanging in there! 

    I'm glad you liked the wards.  I had no idea how they worked so I just kind of made that all up and I was worried someone was going to be like...woah!  It clearly states on page 357 of such and such book that wards are created by the sacrifice of lemurs.  LOL

    Let me know what you think of the next chapter!

    Enjoy!

Title: Chapter 10: Zap 27 Jul 2007 6:02 pm
Reviewer: shiva87 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great story
    please update soon

    Author's Response:

    You got it!

    Thanks

Title: Chapter 10: Zap 27 Jul 2007 7:10 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice chapter! The spacing of paragraphs and dialouge was nicely done for this entire chapter. It's also nice to know that Snape has Harry's best intrests in mind when he tested the Weasley's wards. Great job so far!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review! 

    I was waiting for your review actually.  I've been careful to watch the length of the paragraphs and the dialogue spaces since you mentioned it.  I like it much better this way too.  Thanks.

    I'm especially glad to hear you like the story still.  A few more chapters and then I promise...ACTION! 

Title: Chapter 10: Zap 27 Jul 2007 6:46 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Such a satisfying chapter. I really enjoyed seeing that Snape had fought to keep Harry even though others had fought to take him, as well. I'm so thrilled to hear you have another to post. Yay!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review.  I'll get them posted as fast as I can.  Several are in the works right now and since I tend to write out of chronological order, they'll go faster when I get to later chaps that are already mostly written.  I just realized though...this is going to be a looonnng story!  Yikes!

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