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Reviews For Word Up
Are you using British or American terms? Because I'm trying to picture Snape fighting in his "pants" and am not sure if you mean trousers or underwear! The visual is... alarming! Lol
I understand Harry's worry about Severus but I have to say I'm very nervous about what is going to happen now. This was a very sensitive and emotive chapter. I also appreciated the comic break of Remus and Moody telling Harry about the prank wards, especially what he (didn't) do to Amanda Blackley.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you! I loved writing about those wards. It seemed like the sort of thing he'd do. Just short of hexing the aurors ;^)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I promise not to abandon this fic. It's almost all planned out, I just need to write most of it. I just hope it stays interesting.
Also, the growing care/respect between Severus and Harry is well described. I found this story today (July 30) and read it in one go. I am pleased that you have taken the grammar and paragraph critique to heart. Your story is getting better and better, style-wise. I would really love to see Severus start teaching Harry what true defense is. The DA was all about children teaching children and that can never be the same as what an experienced wizard could teach. Love Severus' book!!! Would want a copy of it!! Have you thought about branching out??! :) Looking forward to the next installment. Sincerely, WannaBeSlytherin Stockholm, Sweden Author's Response: Wow! I loved your review. It was the perfect thing to come home to after work. I absolutely agree with the sentiments on the DA. This is a grown up war and deserves a grown up treatment. More on that soon. Yeah, I really loved that book of Severus' too. Snape is such a bad ass and I wouldn't have him any other way. Thanks for the review and enjoy!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it. That was sad wasn't it? And his poor brother! I don't think I appreciated ihow sad it was until I reread the part where Snape mentions that Samuel followed Nathan around. Then it hit me. OMG, I just killed a child (literatively I mean...did I just make that word up?)
Author's Response: Thanks! Being in character was one of the things that concerned me. I'm always afraid that every character is just going to end up a charicature of an aspect of myself, so I'm really happy to hear that everyone's in character.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I posted the first nine chapters all at once so I didn't know how distracting the paragraph lengths could be until chapter 10 or so. I'll be going back to fix those early chapters very soon. I'm glad you like my style. I tend to write only slightly better than I speak so it was a concern. But I'm getting there. Thanks.
Author's Response: Harry Potter...trouble. Synonyms right? |
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