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Reviews For Word Up
Author's Response: Thanks! Moody is definitely a warrior. I won't begrudge him that. But in all of this, I remind myself that before Snape was a spy, he was a Death Eater. And before that, he was a dark little Slytherin defending himself against Potter and his buddies and "giving as good as he got." He learned how to dodge out of necessity. Thanks for the review!
Your explanation for how spells are created was *really* well done. JKR never explained this, but your ideas make such good sense and can apply to all of the various kinds of spells we see in canon. I wish your explanation *was* canon, it's so good. Then everyone would be using it. Author's Response: Thanks! That spell explanation was trying and I'm really glad it came out as well as it did. I spent a lot of time looking through the books trying to find info on that even though I was pretty sure there wasn't any. Then I just said the hell with it and sat down for an hour and made it up. I wish I could ask JKR if this is what she had in mind. Does the HP lexicon have a theory section? Maybe I'll send it over there. LOL Anyway, glad you're enjoying this and thanks!
Cheers Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad the training stuff came out ok. That's been the work of several hours thought. Enjoy!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! (Bathing in yummy candies)
You used really good description in the scene down by the lake. I could definitely picture the differences in Snape and Harry's movements when attempting to dodge spells without jumping. I hope Harry doesn't do anything stupid at any more Order meetings, although this IS Harry we're talking about and he gets in trouble every five minutes it seems. However, he seems to be maturing slightly in this story, and I like that. As long as he doesn't get TOO mature. lol. ;) This story is awesome. I'm so happy you updated, and I can't wait for the next one! Author's Response: Ok, I have a huge grin on my face now. Thank you so much for your review! I was thinking the same thing as I flipped throught the books this last week because I was trying to find a way to describe the wordless spells. Then I was like, the hell with it. I'll make it up. It's a relief that it makes sense. It took two hours to work that one out. Score! I was kind of laughing at what it must look like, Harry jumping out of the way of those spells. As for stupid mistakes...we'll see. ;^) Thank you so much. I can't wait to finish this next one just so I can see what you say! Enjoy!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! The first in a long line of useful lessons I hope (maybe for both). It's all about reflex.
Author's Response: It's all in good fun. LOL! But yeah, me too!!!!! Thanks for the review! |
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