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Title: Chapter 21: Not Laughing Now, Are You? 22 Sep 2007 8:02 pm
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    OH COME ON! I have given you so many reveiws, could you PLEASE reward me for my kindness and return it by posting before the month of September is over? PLEASE x 1,000,000,000! Please, I really, really, really like this story, you have made every character in character, you have really good ideas, this story is both serious but also is funny, so I really enjoy it, it is also emotional and well thought out and believable. All in all, it is the perfect Harry Potter fan-fiction, so PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE post ASAP! Please. Thanks if you do, and I sincely hope that you do, I mean, I'm basically begging you here, so please post!

    Much love, especially if you post,

    Beth

    P.S. Did I beg well enough?

    Author's Response: OMG!  You crack me up!  lol  All right, all right.  I am trying.  hehe.  I have to say, it makes me feel good that an update means so much to you.  I expect a huge review when I get it up you know.  lol  Glad you enjoy this!  Thanks!
Title: Chapter 21: Not Laughing Now, Are You? 17 Sep 2007 8:40 am
Reviewer: Delaine (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey,
    I didn't realize you had updated this. Yeah! This chapter rawked. I think Harry might wind up scrubbing the dungeon with a tooth brush after all. I hope everyone is alright, but I can't wait for the reaction to Harry tagging along to the battle. That was quick thinking on Tonk's end with the Dumble-disquise. And Severus was too funny with his internal dialogue. "Crucio!" Not laughing now, are you? Awesome chapter.

    Author's Response: Hi!  Oooh, I don’t think dear Harry gave any thought to any unforeseen consequences of tagging along with Remus.  And I’m glad you liked that line.  I rather wondered if anyone would get upset about the Unforgivable.  Thanks for coming over and reviewing here.  I’ve finally worked through the next chapter (had some fun issues with my keyboard).  Thanks and enjoy!
Title: Chapter 21: Not Laughing Now, Are You? 16 Sep 2007 10:29 pm
Reviewer: Syllva (Signed) [Report This]
    Very awesome chapter...oh Harry...not very wise though hah. I like how you changed between Harry and Severus' p.o.v.'s too.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    I'm glad you like the changing viewpoints of this one.  It was something new for me.  Enjoy!

Title: Chapter 21: Not Laughing Now, Are You? 09 Sep 2007 4:00 pm
Reviewer: Azalea (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I'm scared for harry! Is he going to get kidnapped again? hehe

    Is snape FINALLY going to give him some affection? lol!

    I do love this story!
    I like the way your interpret snape!

    Author's Response:

    Lord!  Wouldn't Snape just flip on him?  LOL  We'll see....  ;)

    Ah, affection, well we can always hope.  But I'm going to keep the answer to that one up my sleeve for now. 

    Thank you so much for your review!  I'm especially glad you like this Snape.  It's a little different but I try to keep him snarky (just the way we like him :)

    Enjoy!

Title: Chapter 21: Not Laughing Now, Are You? 08 Sep 2007 11:28 pm
Reviewer: Agneta (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You continue to excell!!! Your building of character and story line is impressive. Your ability to build on character and feelings makes me wonder whether you are a professional writer? You keep me chained to your story. Your warrior Severus is powerful and just right, and Harry is more mature and just perfect.
    Considering the wonderful length of your chapters I understand that it takes time to bring a new one out - but know that in Stockholm, Sweden, sitws a fan eagerly waiting for more.
    Sincerely yours
    Agneta

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  That's an amazing compliment.  This is my first story actually.  All I've done before this are dry technical reports.  But I've learned alot from the feedback from reviewers and my beta so I'm glad that it shows.

    It's so great to hear from people all over the world too.  Sweden is so far from where I am.

    I've had a bit of trouble with my computer in the last few days, which has slowed down my writing, but it's taken care of now, so I hope I'll be able to get another one up soon.

    Thanks and enjoy!

Title: Chapter 21: Not Laughing Now, Are You? 07 Sep 2007 3:09 am
Reviewer: Loxodontamagica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh Harry! You foolish boy! Severus will surely have choice words to say about this rash decision! I hope you both live long enough to hear those words!

    Author's Response:

    It's anyone's guess!  LOL

    Thanks for the review and enjoy!

Title: Chapter 21: Not Laughing Now, Are You? 07 Sep 2007 3:04 am
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    "Tonks had tripped over a crack in the walk when Snape pushed her and she had fallen right behind a dustbin. "Ow!" "

    LOL!!!


    Ooh, stupid Harry going with them to where he most definitely does not belong. Snape's going to murder him.

    Author's Response:

    Glad you liked that line!  Lord, she's a clutz!  LOL

    Snape has been standing in line for that priveledge for soooooo long.  ;)  We'll see...

    Thanks and enjoy!

Title: Chapter 21: Not Laughing Now, Are You? 06 Sep 2007 9:36 pm
Reviewer: taylor (Signed) [Report This]
    Super fic, lass! Very well written! Ta.

    Author's Response:

    Aw shucks, thank you so much.!  I'm having alot of fun with this.  Glad you like it!

    Enjoy!

Title: Chapter 21: Not Laughing Now, Are You? 06 Sep 2007 9:01 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Ohhhhh my God! It can't be the end of the chapter! *sobs*

    Where do I start? This chapter was brilliant. Golden.

    Okay, Spying-with-Snape was the most fun I've had all day. lol. I felt like putting on a cloak and slinking after the man. I thought that Snape's transformation into Petey Sandstone was really clever. For some reason, I kept imagining Snape, undisguised, still speaking like Petey, and it made me chuckle.

    OH! And I loved the changing perspectives, how Snape would pick up on Harry's last thought, and vice-versa.

    And this line actually made me laugh outloud:

    "It's a relief to know that while we're all out fighting, the Ministry is ensuring that sidewalks everywhere are obeying the laws of gravity."

    Oh, the wit and humor of Severus Snape.

    I just knew Harry was going to do something stupid! Although, people underestimate him. He'll probably end up kicking more DE ass than the whole lot of them.

    The suspense is killing me. Although, I must say, this chapter was extremely satisfying...kind of like the pumpkin spice latte that I'm going to get from Starbucks in about an hour. They both give me warm feelings. lol.

    Just know that I am waiting in anticipation, with gritted teeth for the next installment of this story!!! I'm addicted.

    Author's Response:

    Hmmm...pumpkin spice latte.  *drool*  Sorry, I just had a Homer Simpson moment.  LOL

    Thank you!  I'm really glad you liked the changing perspective thing.  I've never done that before but it made this chapter really fun for me.  And I have to admit, now that you've put that image in my head (of Snape as himself acting like Petey) I haven't stopped laughing! 

    As for Harry...I think I'll just let the suspense get to you!  Mwuhahaha

    Thanks so much for the review!  It put a huge grin on my face.  I'll try to get the next one up soon (it's still being written).  Enjoy!

Title: Chapter 21: Not Laughing Now, Are You? 06 Sep 2007 5:36 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    The constant switching of perspective, and gradual building of tension as Snape's errand goes from easy to tense to life-threatening while Harry goes from bored to irritated to nervous was very effective.

    I liked Tonks' creative idea for turning the tables--and I can't wait for Severus to learn that Tonks didn't leave him. But I'm afraid Harry is going to be in a world of trouble after this stunt--but knowing how Harry is coming to view Snape, it just wouldn't be possible for him to not go.

    For some reason, I really loved this sentence:
    "Severus was crouched on a rooftop far above, watching the watcher watch the street."

    Author's Response:

    OMG!  In every chapter that I've written, there are usually about 3 or 4 sentences that stick out in my head.  They might not be clever, but I like them.  I never expect anyone else to notice them though.  But you did!  I just remember liking the way that sounded, repeating the word watch.  It really tied in with the art of spying and it was fun to say when I read it out loud.  LOL!

    And I'm especially glad that you liked the changing perspectives.  That was kind of new for me and I was really quite proud of how that worked out.  Woohoo!  Score!

    You're 100 % right about Harry having to go (in his mind).  As for trouble...mwuhahaha!  I'll post as soon as I can.

    Enjoy!


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