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Title: Chapter 22: I Still Don’t Like You 29 Sep 2007 4:50 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    "If he dies, you die."

    Oh, oh, ohhhh my god. *chills*

    That could very possibly be the most powerfully protective statement in regards to Harry that could ever come out of Snape's mouth. And since your Snape is so in character, that moment was like...hello! Brilliant!

    Do you know how long I've been waiting for an update!? Do you?!

    So, thanks. For updating. It made my night.

    *sigh*

    I really feel sorry for Remus here. You've done a great job of showing his confusion over the whole situation. The moment where he was just standing and staring at the place from where Snape had disappeared was really powerful.

    Hmmm...I dunno...will Snape find out that it was Harry's own choice to come along? Harry may not live to see the light of day, assuming that he's all right. lol. And he is. Right?!

    Oh, and I like your style of writing the action scenes. You use short paragraphs and sentences that seem to aid in the suspense as the chapter progresses. Awesome job with that :)

    As much as I loved this chapter, I seriously can't wait for the next one.

    Author's Response: I am so glad you got the chills from that line.  Apart from real life and the computer, this chapter took a long time to finish off.  This is probably the third version of the ending and I realized immediately when it was done and I put that finishing touch in there.  

    I am really very sorry for the long wait.  If it's any consolation, it's just as painful for me to go that long without hearing from you all as it is for you.  My ego needs regular stroking.  lol  

    That part with Remus...I felt sorry for him.  He has no idea...a completely innocent bystander, once again.  Story of his life really.  

    Will Harry survive?  Oh, that's the question isn't it?  Honestly, it would save Snape a lot of trouble if he just did the job himself.  lol  gasp!  I didn't just say that.  OMG!  Don't anyone kill me.  hehe

    I'm really glad you liked the action scenes too.  It was hard to distance myself from them and judge whether they came out all right.  I appreciate your thoughtful review!  They help as well as put a huge grin on my face and encourage me.  Thanks!  And enjoy!
Title: Chapter 22: I Still Don’t Like You 29 Sep 2007 4:37 am
Reviewer: morgana1616 (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it!!! Snapes re-actions to everything were wonderful and I loved the part with him and Moody. I can't wait to see what happens next!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I have to admit to a certain amount of fondness for good old Moody.  I can't wait to get what happens next finished!  lol  Thanks and enjoy!

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