Awwww, no! You must finish this. It is too good!
| Title: Chapter 23: Order of the Pigeon
| 10 May 2015 7:24 am
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| Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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this is so awesome!! Please more!
| Title: Chapter 23: Order of the Pigeon
| 27 May 2013 7:28 am
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| Reviewer: Phocyn (Anonymous)
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Oh, that was good. Very realistic in fact while keeping the characteristics in line with what I know
about them. Snape did remind me of Batman at one instance. Kind of funny that. :-)
| Title: Chapter 23: Order of the Pigeon
| 23 Jul 2012 9:01 am
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| Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed)
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| Title: Chapter 23: Order of the Pigeon
| 23 Jul 2012 9:01 am
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| Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed)
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| Title: Chapter 23: Order of the Pigeon
| 01 Aug 2011 3:21 am
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| Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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My gracious me! This is a fabulous story! Is there any chance at all of an update?
I love your version of Severus! He's very true to the canon Snape in attitude, but far better, IMO, in his skill and motivations.
Harry's growing respect for Snape is perfect, and I like that Harry Is learning from him... and also that Harry is still Harry and still making the kind of mistakes that he did in canon.
Frankly, I like this AU far better than what happened in books 6 and 7. You've got an excellent plotline going, and I like how your Deatheaters really are people to b afraid of. Sometimes in the novels, they just seemed like cardboard cutouts... you've made them feel like the terrorists they are.
I do hope that you will eventually complete this story. In the meantime, this is going on my favorites list! Well done!
| Title: Chapter 23: Order of the Pigeon
| 20 Dec 2009 3:10 am
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| Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous)
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Hello, no nagging but simply a request to possibly update your outstanding story! It's one of the best I've read...seriously. I've re-read up until this point so many times:)
It is now 4:30 in the morning and I've gotten to the end of what you have posted so far. All I can say at this point is that the adrenalin rush caused by the last three chapters will certainly not let me see sleep before dawn. But oh, it is worth it!
When Severus gets done with Harry (assuming Harry survives the training, that is) the boy is going to be, well, not unbeatable, but probably the best trained soldier and leader the wizarding world has seen in over a century. And he's going ot be one hell of a man in the end. Of course, Severus is one hell of a man now.
You've done such a great job of keeping everyone in character and the aspects of magical theory you've developed are intriguing. I can hardly wait to see what else you have up your sleeve.
I've added this to my favourites and I know I'll be rereading this story over and over again.
| Title: Chapter 23: Order of the Pigeon
| 01 Jul 2008 7:55 pm
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| Reviewer: onaleia (Anonymous)
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This has been an awesome story and I would really like to read more. I especially appreciate watching Snape teaching Harry.
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