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Title: Chapter 23: Order of the Pigeon 24 Feb 2008 2:23 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good.
Title: Chapter 23: Order of the Pigeon 22 Feb 2008 10:59 pm
Reviewer: lisas_castle (Signed) [Report This]
    I just came across your story, are you going to continue it? It's FANTASTIC so far! Please continue?? :)
Title: Chapter 23: Order of the Pigeon 17 Feb 2008 1:51 am
Reviewer: Midnight Oil (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi
    I just discovered and read your whole story in a very short time! I love Snape's character here--so dark, but still has a human side. I see you haven't posted for a while. Please, please add more to this story. This is one that I really, really want to read the end of. I'm looking forward to Harry being back at school, and seeing how his friends and others react to the new relationship between Harry and Snape.

    Please, please add more soon!
Title: Chapter 23: Order of the Pigeon 02 Feb 2008 10:44 pm
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Signed) [Report This]

    I just thought you should be aware that I haven't given up on your wonderful story.

    I know what it feels like to have writer's block. I started and story and got stalled a bit. Reading is certainly easier than writing.

    That's okay. I'll wait patiently; because all good things are worth waiting for, aren't they?

Title: Chapter 23: Order of the Pigeon 23 Nov 2007 12:09 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I've reread your all of your chapters like 4 times now. Pathetic, I know, but I love the tone of your story. Your Snape has untapped depths. He projects a facade of uncaring while doing what has to be done. His grim determination to prepare Harry suits him.
    I'd really love to see a scene where Harry is dueling Malfoy, say in Defense Against the Dark Arts, and while he wins the duel, he takes some injury from a Slytherin(s) who try to assist Malfoy. I'd hate to be on the receiving end of Snape's wrath...I assume he'd take it personally that his charge was injured. There does that help with the block?
    jwkljackson@comcast.net
    I've tried to sign in numerous times, but the laptop from which I access this site doesn't seem to want to cooperate.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks`so`much`for`your`awesome`compliments.``That's`a`good`idea,`and`maybe`I'll`work`it`in.``Not`there`yet`though.``Sorry`about`the`delay``

    I'm`working`slowly.``It's`not`so`much`the`story`as`it`is`real`life`that's`got`in`the`way.``But`I`am`definitely`still`working`on`this`and`have`not`and`will`not`abandon`it``

    Thanks!

    Andy

Title: Chapter 23: Order of the Pigeon 16 Nov 2007 2:58 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Help...must have more chapters to read...slowly fading away!

    Author's Response:

    Hi!``Hang`in`there.``I'm`having`writer's`block`and`alot`of`stuff`at`work`to`do.``Am`writing`though`and`will`try`to`hurry.

    Thanks!

Title: Chapter 23: Order of the Pigeon 25 Oct 2007 7:11 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. Snape in this story is such a fascinating man. It still erks me that Harry in canon never got this kind of training. By the end of DH, I couldn't believe Rowling still thought her Harry could be an auror. I'm really enjoying the tense relationship between Snape and the Order and can't wait to see how Harry and you change their opinions of Snape.

    Author's Response: Hi!  Thanks for the review!  I agree completely with your DH sentiments.  Hermione impressed me ALOT in that story.  I was pretty convinced that she was the hero for most of that story, until the end of course.  She seemed like the only prepared for Auror service.  I'm glad you're liking this take on Snape too.  The Order is fun to write and I think I'll have to include them far more than originally intended.  Anyway, thanks so much.  Pleasure to hear from you as always.  And enjoy!
Title: Chapter 23: Order of the Pigeon 25 Oct 2007 7:05 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    I've been looking for an update for this story pretty hopefully for awhile and was very happy to see this! Excellent chapter. I loved the interplay between Lupin and Snape, and the way Snape wanted to avoid reacting to Harry in line with everyone's expectations.

    Author's Response: Thanks!``I'm`really`glad`you`liked`those`parts.``They`were`fun`to`write,`not`least`because`everyone`expected`Snape`to`flip`out.``Hehe!``Love`hearing`from`you.``Thanks`and`enjoy!
Title: Chapter 23: Order of the Pigeon 25 Oct 2007 1:20 am
Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous) [Report This]
    lmao I love Sevs name for the order XD. Hope your feeling better and congrats on Word Up becoming a featured story :)

    Author's Response: Thanks!  It was awesome to come home and see I got featured.  And I'm completely recovered now.  Glad you liked Snape's name for the Order.  I think that sums up his feelings for them pretty well.  LOL!  Thanks and enjoy!
Title: Chapter 23: Order of the Pigeon 24 Oct 2007 11:58 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved it. Such an amazing chapter. And your characterization of Snape so perfect. You also focused a lot on Harry's emotions in this chapter, which I loved...the fact that he was so disappointed in himself over the whole ordeal. He's learning after all.

    Some favorite lines:

    "Fine. I understand. But I will fight one day. Maybe I am a symbol, and maybe it is selfish to...to consult my own feelings," he used Snape's own words, "but this is my fight as well."

    "Drink up Potter. You'll thank me tomorrow."

    That line made me laugh, because at first I thought...man Harry's going to choke on that whiskey, but Snape DOES have a point...lol.

    You've created such an amazing story. You never skimp on details, and every chapter is interesting. I love it. LOVE it!

    This story deserved to be featured a long time ago. I'm so glad you've finally got the nifty little white ribbon... :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I was really thrilled to be nominated.  And I'm glad you liked this chapter.  I tend to feel for Harry on this issue, because I would feel that this was my war too if I were him.  But on the same token, no one's ever helped him to understand what that means or where his place is, except when Dumbledore explained the prophecy.  And that was almost cruel and didn't help him at all.  I've always thought Snape's brutal honesty would be good for him, as long as he could keep his sharp tongue from being too cutting.  So glad you liked those lines.  I love hearing from you and reading your story too.  Thanks and enjoy!

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