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Reviews For Word Up
I just discovered and read your whole story in a very short time! I love Snape's character here--so dark, but still has a human side. I see you haven't posted for a while. Please, please add more to this story. This is one that I really, really want to read the end of. I'm looking forward to Harry being back at school, and seeing how his friends and others react to the new relationship between Harry and Snape. Please, please add more soon!
I just thought you should be aware that I haven't given up on your wonderful story. I know what it feels like to have writer's block. I started and story and got stalled a bit. Reading is certainly easier than writing. That's okay. I'll wait patiently; because all good things are worth waiting for, aren't they?
I'd really love to see a scene where Harry is dueling Malfoy, say in Defense Against the Dark Arts, and while he wins the duel, he takes some injury from a Slytherin(s) who try to assist Malfoy. I'd hate to be on the receiving end of Snape's wrath...I assume he'd take it personally that his charge was injured. There does that help with the block? jwkljackson@comcast.net I've tried to sign in numerous times, but the laptop from which I access this site doesn't seem to want to cooperate. Author's Response: Thanks`so`much`for`your`awesome`compliments.``That's`a`good`idea,`and`maybe`I'll`work`it`in.``Not`there`yet`though.``Sorry`about`the`delay`` I'm`working`slowly.``It's`not`so`much`the`story`as`it`is`real`life`that's`got`in`the`way.``But`I`am`definitely`still`working`on`this`and`have`not`and`will`not`abandon`it`` Thanks! Andy
Author's Response: Hi!``Hang`in`there.``I'm`having`writer's`block`and`alot`of`stuff`at`work`to`do.``Am`writing`though`and`will`try`to`hurry. Thanks!
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review! I agree completely with your DH sentiments. Hermione impressed me ALOT in that story. I was pretty convinced that she was the hero for most of that story, until the end of course. She seemed like the only prepared for Auror service. I'm glad you're liking this take on Snape too. The Order is fun to write and I think I'll have to include them far more than originally intended. Anyway, thanks so much. Pleasure to hear from you as always. And enjoy!
Author's Response: Thanks!``I'm`really`glad`you`liked`those`parts.``They`were`fun`to`write,`not`least`because`everyone`expected`Snape`to`flip`out.``Hehe!``Love`hearing`from`you.``Thanks`and`enjoy!
Author's Response: Thanks! It was awesome to come home and see I got featured. And I'm completely recovered now. Glad you liked Snape's name for the Order. I think that sums up his feelings for them pretty well. LOL! Thanks and enjoy!
Some favorite lines: "Fine. I understand. But I will fight one day. Maybe I am a symbol, and maybe it is selfish to...to consult my own feelings," he used Snape's own words, "but this is my fight as well." "Drink up Potter. You'll thank me tomorrow." That line made me laugh, because at first I thought...man Harry's going to choke on that whiskey, but Snape DOES have a point...lol. You've created such an amazing story. You never skimp on details, and every chapter is interesting. I love it. LOVE it! This story deserved to be featured a long time ago. I'm so glad you've finally got the nifty little white ribbon... :) Author's Response: Thank you! I was really thrilled to be nominated. And I'm glad you liked this chapter. I tend to feel for Harry on this issue, because I would feel that this was my war too if I were him. But on the same token, no one's ever helped him to understand what that means or where his place is, except when Dumbledore explained the prophecy. And that was almost cruel and didn't help him at all. I've always thought Snape's brutal honesty would be good for him, as long as he could keep his sharp tongue from being too cutting. So glad you liked those lines. I love hearing from you and reading your story too. Thanks and enjoy! |
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