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Reviews For Word Up
I laughed at the idea of the two of them making a bet on who would off voldemort. Snape's autograph vs Harry's signed Chocolate Frog card. Very cute. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please don't make us wait too long. Author's Response: You know...it's surprisingly easy to do a cliffhanger like that. I've been sitting here relishing the tension since posting. Thanks for the review! That wager made me laugh too. I'm so glad you liked it. Stay tuned...
Author's Response: Am I cruel and evil? I prefer to call it Light-Side challenged. ;)
I do hope you have more up your sleeve in terms of chapters :) Author's Response: Yay! You're hooked. Let's see if I can reel you in now. Mr. Sweetness? That's just...yucky! LOL
...hm... I bet Snape was casting a different spell but was making a point that even if you say a spell, it's the intent behind it that makes a spell what it is. Am I right? Please update soon! Author's Response: Hmmm.... :)
I think it'd be funny if Harry grew his hair back overnight like he did when he was younger. :) Author's Response: Hehehehe...Hahahahaha...Mwuhahahahaha! Oh yeah, thanks for the review! Sorry about all the evil laughter. I've been having fits of them all day. :) Hehehehe
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I promise not to abandon this fic. It's almost all planned out, I just need to write most of it. I just hope it stays interesting.
Also, the growing care/respect between Severus and Harry is well described. I found this story today (July 30) and read it in one go. I am pleased that you have taken the grammar and paragraph critique to heart. Your story is getting better and better, style-wise. I would really love to see Severus start teaching Harry what true defense is. The DA was all about children teaching children and that can never be the same as what an experienced wizard could teach. Love Severus' book!!! Would want a copy of it!! Have you thought about branching out??! :) Looking forward to the next installment. Sincerely, WannaBeSlytherin Stockholm, Sweden Author's Response: Wow! I loved your review. It was the perfect thing to come home to after work. I absolutely agree with the sentiments on the DA. This is a grown up war and deserves a grown up treatment. More on that soon. Yeah, I really loved that book of Severus' too. Snape is such a bad ass and I wouldn't have him any other way. Thanks for the review and enjoy!
the boy who lived Should be capitalized. And possibly separated by dashes, although that's up to you. deatheaters Capitalized and two separate words. anyways Despite rampant misuse, there is no such word. The word you want is "anyway." Misspellings of canon words and names is always more irritating than any other misspellings or grammar problems. I once got crucified for misspelling "Krycek" on an X-Files mailing list... and it wasn't even in a fic! Author's Response: Thanks for the review and thank you very much for the corrections. I've got a beta now...YAY! and we're going back over all the chapters and fixing them. I'll watch for those mistakes. She's already fixed the 'Death Eaters' for me and probably others. I'll go back and check now. I had no idea anyways wasn't even a word! Learn something new everyday. :) Thanks and enjoy!
Now, a couple of things I noticed: "Albus Dumbledore was a man that" Things THAT, People WHO. It should be "Dumbledore was a man who." "a man that did wear his heart" Same as above. Should be who, not that. dark lord Should be always capitalized. It's his title and stands in for his name. auror Also should be capitalized... not for any really good reason, but because Rowling capitalizes it. DeathEater Always two words, not one. Author's Response: Thank you! I mean that. I'll get those changes in sometime today or tonight. I really appreciate that you let me know the mistake and why it should be fixed. You're a good teacher. I can't say enough about how happy I am you like my Snape. I hope I can keep him up to those standards. I am definitely in the 'Snape is one scary guy' camp. Thanks and enjoy.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it. That was sad wasn't it? And his poor brother! I don't think I appreciated ihow sad it was until I reread the part where Snape mentions that Samuel followed Nathan around. Then it hit me. OMG, I just killed a child (literatively I mean...did I just make that word up?) |
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