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Reviews For Word Up
Your Voldemort is wonderful. And I mean that in the absolutely-insanely-terrifyingly-evil sort of way. I think poor Harry is in for a rough go of it, isn't he? Author's Response: Yeah...Voldemort Rocks! >;)
Author's Response: Thanks! I have this idea that Snape has an ego. Don't know where I got that :) I just thought that writing a book would be something he'd do, especially because he can't stand the incompetence of all the DADA teachers he's seen.
Author's Response: Yeah, he is scary. I'm glad that came through in the story. I don't want anybody to forget who we're dealing with here.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. The poem is from an ancient sumerian story (it's not mine)...kind of like the biblical story of Job. I liked it too. More on that later.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like it. Do you mean like describing rooms and objects and setting the scene? Can do! Keep making suggestions on my writing, I'm trying to use them all in later chapters. I think it's really been helping me. But I'll let y'all be the judge of that.
Author's Response: Awesome, Thanks! I really liked this chapter too.
Author's Response: I'm really glad it worked out too. My computer died about fifteen seconds after it posted but I went out today and got the part so everything's back up and running...including the story. And all I can say about Snape and the redemption theme is...yeah. I quite agree. More on that later. Much later.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I was going to post another one tonight but my computer got messed up and I got to go drop a hundred dollars tomorrow. It won't be long though. As far as Remus and Snape go, he trusts Snape in some areas but not with Harry. Poor guy. We'll see though :)
Author's Response: Thanks, that was what I was worried about; being in character. I'm having minor problems with my computer but I expect they'll be fixed by tomorrow night so expect more then!
I love the story! Can't wait for the next installment. Keep your paragraphs to under one hundred words and you should be safe. Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you love the story. The trouble I have with writing is I'm used to writing up technical reports. I can do them up in a jiffy and they're always fine. But narration is a little harder for me. When I first started, my stories were always like..."This happened. And then this happened. and then this happened." But I'm getting there. I figure, as soon as I find out what a reflexive pronoun is, I'll be fine. LOL |
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