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Title: Chapter 2: From Bad To Worse...Much Worse 28 Jul 2007 11:53 am
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm not surprised that Vernon kicked him out, and I'm not surprised that Deatheaters were waiting for the exact moment the wards failed. I am, however, surprised that no one from the order was there to help Harry. Must have been Mundungus' turn to watch Harry again.

    Your Voldemort is wonderful. And I mean that in the absolutely-insanely-terrifyingly-evil sort of way. I think poor Harry is in for a rough go of it, isn't he?

    Author's Response: Yeah...Voldemort Rocks!   >;)
Title: Chapter 12: Hymn of The Sufferer 28 Jul 2007 11:38 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! I'm glad to see some of Snape's famous temper appearing in this chapter. That's also pretty neat that he wrote a book. Your story has been steadily improving in each chapter and I'm looking forward to reading about what happens next!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  I have this idea that Snape has an ego.  Don't know where I got that :)  I just thought that writing a book would be something he'd do, especially because he can't stand the incompetence of all the DADA teachers he's seen. 

Title: Chapter 1: Warnings 28 Jul 2007 11:37 am
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape's a bit like the Lone Ranger, isn't he? Quite a scary guy, actually. Good start to your story. Now I'm off to the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Yeah, he is scary.  I'm glad that came through in the story.  I don't want anybody to forget who we're dealing with here.
Title: Chapter 12: Hymn of The Sufferer 28 Jul 2007 9:46 am
Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Totally loved this chapter and the poem was great. Keep up the good work, cant wait to read more

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much for the review. 

    The poem is from an ancient sumerian story (it's not mine)...kind of like the biblical story of Job.  I liked it too.  More on that later.

Title: Chapter 12: Hymn of The Sufferer 28 Jul 2007 9:34 am
Reviewer: Siofra (Signed) [Report This]
    Great job on the story so far! I really like to see how their relationship keeps changing. Some places could be more descriptive, but nothing is glaringly wrong. Keep up the good work!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review!  I'm glad you like it.

    Do you mean like describing rooms and objects and setting the scene?  Can do!

    Keep making suggestions on my writing, I'm trying to use them all in later chapters.  I think it's really been helping me.  But I'll let y'all be the judge of that.

Title: Chapter 12: Hymn of The Sufferer 28 Jul 2007 9:11 am
Reviewer: Gryffinbear (Signed) [Report This]
    i love this story especially the newest chapter !

    Author's Response: Awesome, Thanks!  I really liked this chapter too.
Title: Chapter 12: Hymn of The Sufferer 28 Jul 2007 7:26 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really glad this posted. Snape's works sound wonderful. You made me wish they were real. And his feelings about Harry's appreciation for his life works were better than the fics where he's always feeling he can never be redeemed. I really like him this way much better because he's redeemed himself over and over, in my opinion. I'm glad your Snape has the same opinion.

    Author's Response:

    I'm really glad it worked out too.  My computer died about fifteen seconds after it posted but I went out today and got the part so everything's back up and running...including the story. 

    And all I can say about Snape and the redemption theme is...yeah.  I quite agree.  More on that later.  Much later.

Title: Chapter 11: Snapesbane 28 Jul 2007 5:52 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Another lovely chapter! I had this feeling that Remus was going the abuse route especially since Harry was cooking then ended up cutting his finger. Remus has good intentions but he should learn to trust Snape since Dumbledore does. They are not likely to ever get along but oh well. Anyways, great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you liked it.  I was going to post another one tonight but my computer got messed up and I got to go drop a hundred dollars tomorrow.  It won't be long though. 

     As far as Remus and Snape go, he trusts Snape in some areas but not with Harry.  Poor guy.  We'll see though :) 

Title: Chapter 11: Snapesbane 28 Jul 2007 3:57 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    You're really writing a fabulous story. It's so perfectly canon, character wise, and interesting, too. And you update frequently, that's the best part!

    Author's Response: Thanks, that was what I was worried about; being in character.  I'm having minor problems with my computer but I expect they'll be fixed by tomorrow night so expect more then!
Title: Chapter 11: Snapesbane 28 Jul 2007 1:30 am
Reviewer: Jen77 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Your grammar is not that bad. I have read a lot worse. It does bug me when In see mistakes in grammar and spelling so I kinda understand the reviewers POV. However, they did not even leave a name.
    I love the story! Can't wait for the next installment. Keep your paragraphs to under one hundred words and you should be safe.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  I'm really glad you love the story. 

    The trouble I have with writing is I'm used to writing up technical reports.  I can do them up in a jiffy and they're always fine.  But narration is a little harder for me.  When I first started, my stories were always like..."This happened.  And then this happened.  and then this happened."  But I'm getting there.

    I figure, as soon as I find out what a reflexive pronoun is, I'll be fine.  LOL


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