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Reviews For Word Up
Just a little point out: "Remus felt his heart sore". I think it should be "soar" One more suggestion- try separating dialouge into new paragraphs like so: "Hello," said Harry. "Hi," said Ron. It makes it easier to follow the speakers when thier words are fully seperated. Author's Response: Hey! Thanks so much for the responses. I'll definitely be careful in the future with the dialogue and the spelling. Microsoft Word is great for spell checking but sore and soar just doesn't come up. I'll have to watch that. I was really nervous since I've never posted anything before but your reviews made me feel great! Whew!
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