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Title: Chapter 23: Order of the Pigeon 24 Oct 2007 10:06 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Snape was in perfect form from word one. Harry was caught in a whirlwind of Snape's odd behavior (according to much of the world). It was terrific.

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I'm very glad you liked Snape here.  It's funny the way you said that, "whirlwind of odd behavior."  It's completely true, I couldn't say it better myself.  Naturally, he knows exactly why he says what he does, but everyone else must be reeling, and that no doubt, amuses him greatly.  Thanks so much for the review.  I love hearing from you.  Enjoy!
Title: Chapter 23: Order of the Pigeon 24 Oct 2007 8:24 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good chapter! I'm especially glad they managed to work things out and Remus didn't suffer Snape's hexes. That was good of Harry to stand up and say it was his fault he was there in the first place. Keep up the great writing and please update again soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I am terribly sorry`that last one took so long to post.  I'm working feverishly on the next one.  I'm glad you liked the resolution in that one.  Thanks and enjoy!
Title: Chapter 22: I Still Don’t Like You 14 Oct 2007 1:07 pm
Reviewer: Twinheart (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter! Please send me a post when you can - my emails to you are coming back rejected. Cheers.

    Author's Response: Thanks!``I'm`relieved`you`liked`this`chapter!``Talk`to`you`later.``Enjoy!
Title: Chapter 22: I Still Don’t Like You 01 Oct 2007 9:30 pm
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) [Report This]
    When Snape learns that Harry came on his own accord - hope he realizes Harry was just concerned about him. Then please allow Harry to fall into unconsciousness in self-defense. LoL!:) Loved how scary and worried Snape was in this chapter. Thanks!

    Author's Response:

    Oh`Lord!``That's`a`hilarious`idea!``Harry`swooning.``LOL.``Thanks`for`the`review.``Enjoy!

Title: Chapter 22: I Still Don’t Like You 01 Oct 2007 3:55 am
Reviewer: Syllva (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow great installment, I especially liked the last scene.

    Author's Response: Thanks!``Really`glad`you`liked`that`last`line!``Took`me`long`enough`to`come`up`with.``LOL``Enjoy!
Title: Chapter 22: I Still Don’t Like You 01 Oct 2007 12:05 am
Reviewer: pkrosche (Signed) [Report This]
    Oohh! I've been waiting forever for an update and it's here!! Great chapter, although I feel horrible because I don't remember all of the back story from all the previous chapters. But, it's all great from where I sit!

    Really good job of characterization with Severus, everything he did I could see him doing. Especially his treatening of Remus due to his improved relationship with Harry.

    Can't wait to see if Harry's ok. Hopefully there's nothing really life-threatening that would cause him to die and thus cause Snape to kill Reumus. (Although it would be an intense ending!) I really hope that Harry is able to stand up to Snape and say that it wasn't Remus' fault. Hopefully Severus goes easy on him!

    Can't wait for the next update!

    Author's Response: HI!  Sorry it's taken me so long to respond.  I really appreciated your review.  All (or at least most) will be answered in next chapter, which is with my beta.  Enjoy!
Title: Chapter 22: I Still Don’t Like You 30 Sep 2007 10:33 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ::cackles insanely:: Is Severus a panther animagus? Was that the reason for the metaphor? ::continues to cackle:: I love this extremely-protective Severus - one of my favorites in a story regarding the Harry and Snape relationship.

    Please, update when you can. I really do look forward to more.

    Yours,
    Lady Julie Snape.

    Author's Response: Thank you mylady! Sorry it took me so long to reply. Panther animagus? Hmmm...:)..lol! Glad you're liking Snape! Next one is with the beta now. Enjoy!
Title: Chapter 22: I Still Don’t Like You 30 Sep 2007 4:00 pm
Reviewer: Loxodontamagica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great battle scene! I hope Moody will survive, as well as Remus, when Snape getsd near him again!
    @nnie

    Author's Response: Hi @nnie!  Thanks for the review.  I apologize for taking so long to respond.  Glad you liked the battle.  As for survival, Remus' odds don't look good do they?  LOL!  Enjoy!
Title: Chapter 22: I Still Don’t Like You 30 Sep 2007 3:59 am
Reviewer: mamaduck (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well. I love the comment from Lupin about his 30% chance of coming unscathed through a duel with flu-ridden Snape. All that barely restrained violence simmering in Snape. Given his brief thought about taking Harry over his knee after the Junior Detective League incident and his present state of mind (ie frantic), I can only imagine what Snape may have in store for Harry when the truth about this latest escapade is revealed. Poor Harry. Isn't adolescence tough? Lovely job, waiting for the next chapter with baited breath.

    Author's Response: Thanks!  Poor Harry indeed.  This will be a trying night for everyone.  Glad`you`liked`that`line.``I`laughed`writing`it.``Next chapter with the beta now.  Enjoy!
Title: Chapter 22: I Still Don’t Like You 30 Sep 2007 2:26 am
Reviewer: cathyrf (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! That last line...chilling.

    I could so easily understand Snape's fury and yet feel so sorry for Remus, since techincally it wasn't his fault Harry was there.

    Can't wait to read the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks!  Sorry it's taken me so long to reply.  I'm especially glad you liked the last line.  It took me a long time to decide on the ending but when I had it, I was like...yeah, that's Snape.  lol  Enjoy!

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