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Title: Chapter 22: I Still Don’t Like You 29 Sep 2007 5:21 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, finally...I know you had computer problems, but some of us were just wasting away with anticipation you know! Sorry...lots of sympathy is now sent forth to you on a ray of sunshine.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I received your ray of sunshine with a smile!  I am really sorry about the wait.  And you are not allowed to waste away.  I forbid it!  lol  If you did, who would review my story and send me rays of sunshine with sympathy?  Thanks and enjoy!
Title: Chapter 22: I Still Don’t Like You 29 Sep 2007 4:50 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    "If he dies, you die."

    Oh, oh, ohhhh my god. *chills*

    That could very possibly be the most powerfully protective statement in regards to Harry that could ever come out of Snape's mouth. And since your Snape is so in character, that moment was like...hello! Brilliant!

    Do you know how long I've been waiting for an update!? Do you?!

    So, thanks. For updating. It made my night.

    *sigh*

    I really feel sorry for Remus here. You've done a great job of showing his confusion over the whole situation. The moment where he was just standing and staring at the place from where Snape had disappeared was really powerful.

    Hmmm...I dunno...will Snape find out that it was Harry's own choice to come along? Harry may not live to see the light of day, assuming that he's all right. lol. And he is. Right?!

    Oh, and I like your style of writing the action scenes. You use short paragraphs and sentences that seem to aid in the suspense as the chapter progresses. Awesome job with that :)

    As much as I loved this chapter, I seriously can't wait for the next one.

    Author's Response: I am so glad you got the chills from that line.  Apart from real life and the computer, this chapter took a long time to finish off.  This is probably the third version of the ending and I realized immediately when it was done and I put that finishing touch in there.  

    I am really very sorry for the long wait.  If it's any consolation, it's just as painful for me to go that long without hearing from you all as it is for you.  My ego needs regular stroking.  lol  

    That part with Remus...I felt sorry for him.  He has no idea...a completely innocent bystander, once again.  Story of his life really.  

    Will Harry survive?  Oh, that's the question isn't it?  Honestly, it would save Snape a lot of trouble if he just did the job himself.  lol  gasp!  I didn't just say that.  OMG!  Don't anyone kill me.  hehe

    I'm really glad you liked the action scenes too.  It was hard to distance myself from them and judge whether they came out all right.  I appreciate your thoughtful review!  They help as well as put a huge grin on my face and encourage me.  Thanks!  And enjoy!
Title: Chapter 22: I Still Don’t Like You 29 Sep 2007 4:37 am
Reviewer: morgana1616 (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it!!! Snapes re-actions to everything were wonderful and I loved the part with him and Moody. I can't wait to see what happens next!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I have to admit to a certain amount of fondness for good old Moody.  I can't wait to get what happens next finished!  lol  Thanks and enjoy!
Title: Chapter 21: Not Laughing Now, Are You? 22 Sep 2007 8:02 pm
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    OH COME ON! I have given you so many reveiws, could you PLEASE reward me for my kindness and return it by posting before the month of September is over? PLEASE x 1,000,000,000! Please, I really, really, really like this story, you have made every character in character, you have really good ideas, this story is both serious but also is funny, so I really enjoy it, it is also emotional and well thought out and believable. All in all, it is the perfect Harry Potter fan-fiction, so PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE post ASAP! Please. Thanks if you do, and I sincely hope that you do, I mean, I'm basically begging you here, so please post!

    Much love, especially if you post,

    Beth

    P.S. Did I beg well enough?

    Author's Response: OMG!  You crack me up!  lol  All right, all right.  I am trying.  hehe.  I have to say, it makes me feel good that an update means so much to you.  I expect a huge review when I get it up you know.  lol  Glad you enjoy this!  Thanks!
Title: Chapter 18: Junior Detective League 22 Sep 2007 8:03 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmmmmmmmm, I think Snape would listen to music, like that has meaning to it, like, you know how some songs have a storey to them, and they are usually sad? Well, something like that, almost like country rock, it isn't really country, but it can either be smooth or fast. If I knew what it was called this whole thing would be much shorter. Dam! Oh well, this story is really great!

    Author's Response: Do you mean like folk music?  No, that doesn’t really fit your description either.  But I think I get it.  If I figure out the genre, I’ll let you know.  Glad you like the story!  Thanks and enjoy!
Title: Chapter 17: That's Some...Interesting Symbolism Sir 22 Sep 2007 5:55 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I think I got a spoiler of what Snape's patronus was, I won't say it though, because you may be like me and prefer to read the books only when the movies are near the theaters, but I will say that if they are correct, his patronus is a very beautiful and cute animal, sutes him...at least I think so. PLEASE DON'T GIVE ME ANY SPOILERS FOR HBP & DH! Thanks, since I would be upset if you did.

    Author's Response:

    What!???  You haven’t read HBP or DH yet!?  How can you stand to wait?  Ah well.  So the thing is, this story is AU after OoTP, which means that I may or may not take anything out of HBP or DH, but some things will be different.  I won’t say whether Snape has a Patronus or if so, what it is, in this review because it would be a spoiler for this story.  But I’ll be careful about what I say in the author’s notes for you.  But tell me, how on earth would a cute animal suit Snape?  lmao.  No, I can see it.  Thanks Beth!  Enjoy!

Title: Chapter 15: Move 22 Sep 2007 4:33 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Dear validego,
    About chapter 15, since at this time, that is the chapter I just finnished reading: Naw, I'm not mad about the last chapter, I knew Snape wouldn't risk Harry's life. I realy thought the Snape and Winky interaction was quit cute, it made me think of this picture I saved by kinokochan on DeviantArt, heres the link adress: http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs6/i/2005/092/c/c/Clinging_to_Snape_by_kinokochan.jpg I am looking forward to how Winky has become a Snape worshiper. HOW CUTE! Hope you love kinokochan's picture as much as I did...of course...the only way you could, would be if you loved Snape is much as I do too...and I just don't know if you love him as much as I do....LOL! Still lov'n this storey!

    much love,

    Beth

    P.S. When I FINALLY post a fan-fiction of my own here, I hope you read it and leave me reveiws! I realy need to get my arse in gear and finnish a fan-fic and post it, sheesh!

    Author's Response: OMG!  That picture was freaking hilarious!  I loved it.  And absolutely, when you post a story, let me know so I can go find it.  When I’m writing I don’t always pay attention to new story updates, but I’ll go read and review what you get up.  As far as the who loves Snape issue more…oh no you didn’t!  lol  Snape’s mine - but if you wanna borrow him…lol.  I’m waiting for the hate mail to pour in now.  hehe  Anyway, glad you love the story.  I love your reviews.  Thanks Beth!  Enjoy!
Title: Chapter 12: Hymn of The Sufferer 22 Sep 2007 3:15 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    That ancient Sumerian was quit sad...Where did you find it? I am very curiuos if there are others like it, because, like Harry said, I thought it sounded like something Snape would write too. HOW SAD! *sob* On a brighter note, I love how you have a lot of Remus and Severus enteraction because I LOVE them both so much! And Ron, but, he's taken by Herione...well, Remus is taken by Tonks too...so I'll just have to love Snape more, now wont I? LOL! Lov'n this storey validego!

    much love,

    Beth

    Author's Response:

    That hymn actually is ancient Sumerian.  No joke.  But I'm going to be taking a lot of liberties with it in this story.  I know, it is sad.  It will definitely come up again.  Remus will be in here a lot, so I'm glad you like interaction between them.  But just in case, we'll both have to love Snape.  lol  Thanks Beth!  Enjoy!

Title: Chapter 11: Snapesbane 22 Sep 2007 2:46 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    This storey just keeps getting more and more interesting, funny, and quit realistic too, actually. I have a quesion for you though, it's nothing to do with the storey, which is really good from how much I've read so far, but I would like to still know: What exactly dose a beta do? Do they check for spelling errors or something? Please answer my question, and also what TBC means as well as i've yet to figure it out. Thanks if you do!

    Author's Response:

    Hi!  Yeah, a beta reads a chapter before it’s posted to check for grammatical and punctuation errors.  They have the job of editor, though I’m not sure why they’re called betas instead of editors.  TBC means ”to be continued.”  Glad you’re liking the story so far.  Thanks and enjoy!

Title: Chapter 10: Zap 22 Sep 2007 2:13 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I love Snape's humor! He's so cute sometimes. When I fianly finnish reading this storey, I'm gonna go look for other stories of your's because I'm really enjoying this so far.

    Author's Response: Hi!  I don’t have any other stories here yet because the only other one I have posted anywhere is a first war fic about Snape.  It’s on fanfiction.net.  I have the same name there, Validego, and both Word Up and Bad Ass (my other story) are there.  Bad Ass is only three chapters but will be continued.  I’d love to hear from you if you go over there to read it.  Thanks!  And enjoy!

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