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Reviews For Word Up
Author's Response: Thank you! I received your ray of sunshine with a smile! I am really sorry about the wait. And you are not allowed to waste away. I forbid it! lol If you did, who would review my story and send me rays of sunshine with sympathy? Thanks and enjoy!
Oh, oh, ohhhh my god. *chills* That could very possibly be the most powerfully protective statement in regards to Harry that could ever come out of Snape's mouth. And since your Snape is so in character, that moment was like...hello! Brilliant! Do you know how long I've been waiting for an update!? Do you?! So, thanks. For updating. It made my night. *sigh* I really feel sorry for Remus here. You've done a great job of showing his confusion over the whole situation. The moment where he was just standing and staring at the place from where Snape had disappeared was really powerful. Hmmm...I dunno...will Snape find out that it was Harry's own choice to come along? Harry may not live to see the light of day, assuming that he's all right. lol. And he is. Right?! Oh, and I like your style of writing the action scenes. You use short paragraphs and sentences that seem to aid in the suspense as the chapter progresses. Awesome job with that :) As much as I loved this chapter, I seriously can't wait for the next one. Author's Response: I am so glad you got the chills from that line. Apart from real life and the computer, this chapter took a long time to finish off. This is probably the third version of the ending and I realized immediately when it was done and I put that finishing touch in there. I am really very sorry for the long wait. If it's any consolation, it's just as painful for me to go that long without hearing from you all as it is for you. My ego needs regular stroking. lol That part with Remus...I felt sorry for him. He has no idea...a completely innocent bystander, once again. Story of his life really. Will Harry survive? Oh, that's the question isn't it? Honestly, it would save Snape a lot of trouble if he just did the job himself. lol gasp! I didn't just say that. OMG! Don't anyone kill me. hehe I'm really glad you liked the action scenes too. It was hard to distance myself from them and judge whether they came out all right. I appreciate your thoughtful review! They help as well as put a huge grin on my face and encourage me. Thanks! And enjoy!
Author's Response: Thank you! I have to admit to a certain amount of fondness for good old Moody. I can't wait to get what happens next finished! lol Thanks and enjoy!
Much love, especially if you post, Beth P.S. Did I beg well enough? Author's Response: OMG! You crack me up! lol All right, all right. I am trying. hehe. I have to say, it makes me feel good that an update means so much to you. I expect a huge review when I get it up you know. lol Glad you enjoy this! Thanks!
Author's Response: Do you mean like folk music? No, that doesn’t really fit your description either. But I think I get it. If I figure out the genre, I’ll let you know. Glad you like the story! Thanks and enjoy!
Author's Response: What!??? You haven’t read HBP or DH yet!? How can you stand to wait? Ah well. So the thing is, this story is AU after OoTP, which means that I may or may not take anything out of HBP or DH, but some things will be different. I won’t say whether Snape has a Patronus or if so, what it is, in this review because it would be a spoiler for this story. But I’ll be careful about what I say in the author’s notes for you. But tell me, how on earth would a cute animal suit Snape? lmao. No, I can see it. Thanks Beth! Enjoy!
About chapter 15, since at this time, that is the chapter I just finnished reading: Naw, I'm not mad about the last chapter, I knew Snape wouldn't risk Harry's life. I realy thought the Snape and Winky interaction was quit cute, it made me think of this picture I saved by kinokochan on DeviantArt, heres the link adress: http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs6/i/2005/092/c/c/Clinging_to_Snape_by_kinokochan.jpg I am looking forward to how Winky has become a Snape worshiper. HOW CUTE! Hope you love kinokochan's picture as much as I did...of course...the only way you could, would be if you loved Snape is much as I do too...and I just don't know if you love him as much as I do....LOL! Still lov'n this storey! much love, Beth P.S. When I FINALLY post a fan-fiction of my own here, I hope you read it and leave me reveiws! I realy need to get my arse in gear and finnish a fan-fic and post it, sheesh! Author's Response: OMG! That picture was freaking hilarious! I loved it. And absolutely, when you post a story, let me know so I can go find it. When I’m writing I don’t always pay attention to new story updates, but I’ll go read and review what you get up. As far as the who loves Snape issue more…oh no you didn’t! lol Snape’s mine - but if you wanna borrow him…lol. I’m waiting for the hate mail to pour in now. hehe Anyway, glad you love the story. I love your reviews. Thanks Beth! Enjoy!
much love, Beth Author's Response: That hymn actually is ancient Sumerian. No joke. But I'm going to be taking a lot of liberties with it in this story. I know, it is sad. It will definitely come up again. Remus will be in here a lot, so I'm glad you like interaction between them. But just in case, we'll both have to love Snape. lol Thanks Beth! Enjoy!
Author's Response: Hi! Yeah, a beta reads a chapter before it’s posted to check for grammatical and punctuation errors. They have the job of editor, though I’m not sure why they’re called betas instead of editors. TBC means ”to be continued.” Glad you’re liking the story so far. Thanks and enjoy!
Author's Response: Hi! I don’t have any other stories here yet because the only other one I have posted anywhere is a first war fic about Snape. It’s on fanfiction.net. I have the same name there, Validego, and both Word Up and Bad Ass (my other story) are there. Bad Ass is only three chapters but will be continued. I’d love to hear from you if you go over there to read it. Thanks! And enjoy! |
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