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Title: Chapter 9: Rules 22 Sep 2007 1:18 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I thought the inner thoughts were very good, don't doupt yourself validego!

    much love,

    Beth

    Author's Response: Thanks Beth!  It’s hard to know if I’m stepping out of character when I write, so it helps a lot to have feedback on that.  It’s encouraging.  Enjoy!
Title: Chapter 3: So...You Don't Trust Me? 21 Sep 2007 7:33 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I totally agree, Snape should be an actor. I love him! And I am loving this storey, it just getting really good.

    Author's Response: Hi!  Thanks for the review.  Maybe he’ll take to the stage after everything.  lol  Glad you’re enjoying this so far.  
Title: Chapter 21: Not Laughing Now, Are You? 17 Sep 2007 8:40 am
Reviewer: Delaine (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey,
    I didn't realize you had updated this. Yeah! This chapter rawked. I think Harry might wind up scrubbing the dungeon with a tooth brush after all. I hope everyone is alright, but I can't wait for the reaction to Harry tagging along to the battle. That was quick thinking on Tonk's end with the Dumble-disquise. And Severus was too funny with his internal dialogue. "Crucio!" Not laughing now, are you? Awesome chapter.

    Author's Response: Hi!  Oooh, I don’t think dear Harry gave any thought to any unforeseen consequences of tagging along with Remus.  And I’m glad you liked that line.  I rather wondered if anyone would get upset about the Unforgivable.  Thanks for coming over and reviewing here.  I’ve finally worked through the next chapter (had some fun issues with my keyboard).  Thanks and enjoy!
Title: Chapter 21: Not Laughing Now, Are You? 16 Sep 2007 10:29 pm
Reviewer: Syllva (Signed) [Report This]
    Very awesome chapter...oh Harry...not very wise though hah. I like how you changed between Harry and Severus' p.o.v.'s too.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    I'm glad you like the changing viewpoints of this one.  It was something new for me.  Enjoy!

Title: Chapter 15: Move 15 Sep 2007 8:59 am
Reviewer: Syllva (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter...as usual. I sorta feel bad I only just started reading this and therefore these comments might not mean as much, I also am sorry my reviews aren't creative haha.

    Author's Response:

    Hi!  I enjoy your reviews and they do mean something to me, even if its just feedback.  They don’t have to be creative.  I just want to know if you liked it or if not, what you didn’t like.  Most of the plot is planned out but how I write it and the in between scenes that bring us to the plot, those still need to be written and feedback gives me a good idea of what people like in a story.  Let me know.  And thanks for the review!

    Enjoy!
Title: Chapter 13: Pent Up Aggressions 15 Sep 2007 7:41 am
Reviewer: Syllva (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Snape..nicely written scenes as usual! XD

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 12: Hymn of The Sufferer 15 Sep 2007 6:59 am
Reviewer: Syllva (Signed) [Report This]
    An awesome chapter XD.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 9: Rules 14 Sep 2007 6:34 am
Reviewer: Syllva (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter, I loved the Trelawney jokes especially. XD

    Author's Response:

    Ah, Trelawney.  It's almost too easy.  LOL

    Thanks for the review and enjoy!

Title: Chapter 8: Severus Snape 14 Sep 2007 5:18 am
Reviewer: Syllva (Signed) [Report This]
    This was really good. A brilliant idea with Snape and how he really started to help the Order.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  This story is hopelesly AU so I'm really glad this new take on things is satisfying.

    Enjoy!

Title: Chapter 6: What's in a Dream? 14 Sep 2007 3:49 am
Reviewer: Syllva (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter. Oh and I hate those kinds of dreams..haha, poor Harry.

    Author's Response:

    They're almost as bad as the dreams where you jolt awake thinking you're falling.  :)

    Glad you're enjoying the story.  


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