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Reviews For Walk the Shadows
Title: Chapter 10 01 Aug 2007 8:43 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter! I liked how the end part was told from Harry's POV and what he was feeling. Keep up the great writing!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 10 01 Aug 2007 8:29 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I think you've depicted the internal suffering of an abused boy just brilliantly. As I read this chapter, I felt so incredibly sad for Harry, but I also took comfort in knowing that he'll finally have someone to help him heal. Does that make sense?

    I can't wait to see where you take this story. Its intensity is addicting, and I think you have a real talent for expressing human emotion in words.

    Excellent chapter, as always :)

    Author's Response:

    Does that make sense?

    Absolutely!  I think a big part of the hurt/comfort cycle is for the reader to get a big part of the comfort, often well before the characters in the story experience it.

    I very much appreciate your kind words, and hope to continue to live up to them.  :-)

Title: Chapter 10 01 Aug 2007 8:09 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellently written. Nothing trivialized, nothing overdone. I'll definately be back every time there's an update. It's a really good story.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm working on the next chapter now, so it should be up by tomorrow.

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