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Title: Chapter 15 19 Sep 2017 6:03 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! Harry didn't say he saw Hedwig dead, specifically. He said that there was silence after Vernon was done kicking. So, maybe Harry's accidental magic worked and opened Hedwigs cage and she flew away? Please?
Title: Chapter 15 22 Jan 2013 5:05 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Why does Harry want to stay with Severus? I think Albus will break soon and tell people/someone where Harry is or what happened to him. Thank you for another chapter.
Title: Chapter 15 09 Mar 2010 5:54 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    A slightly stupid cow? Most of them are at least SLIGHTLY stupid. My grandpa's are the most intelligent ones I, or anyone I know, have come upon and really their smarts only seem to arrive when they are giving birth. They aren't as bad as sheep though.
    Oh and I loved Hagrid and I always hoped Umbridge was never found.
    I also like how you imply that someone has researched the nutritious value of fingernails. All I can say is they are high in dead keritin.

    Oh, Hedwig? No, no, she shouldn't die, she should have been set to Ron's. Animals shouldn't be hurt, no.
Title: Chapter 15 22 Apr 2008 1:00 am
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Hedwig!!! Poor Harry I hope Snape finds Vernon and CURSES Him!
Title: Chapter 15 11 Aug 2007 10:56 am
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. You almost had me crying at several different parts, starting with Harry talking about Hedwig. I'm glad Snape can understand how important Hedwig was to Harry.

    It seems like Harry and Snape still have quite a long road ahead of them. It definitely seems to be a 'two steps forward, three steps back' sort of process. Pretty realistic.

    Anyway, thanks for the update. I will be gone to camp for the next week, so I'm sure I'll have a few chapters of this and your other story to read when I get back. Can't wait.

    Author's Response: Thanks for your review, curlybean!  Yes, Harry's recovery isn't linear by any stretch.  And Sev, well, we'll have more on his own background in later chapters.   should have a new chapter out today or tomorrow.  Have fun at camp!
Title: Chapter 15 10 Aug 2007 6:43 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    Uncle Vernon is such a ...GAH! What a terrible thing to do to a kids pet. That's just awful - though I do like the way you incorporated her death into the story. My heart hitched when he mourned her death in canon.

    So, I'm gathering that Snape's - promise - to arrange for other accomidations would mean St. Mungos? Not because he can't handle an out of control teen, but because he thinks Harry may need the help? Psychologically?

    Great chapter. Gotta love the hurt/comfort stuff :D

    Keira

    Author's Response:

    Hi Kiera,  thanks for the review!  I should have a new chapter out on the weekend, if all goes as planned.  Yes, I will be more explicit about what they're "discussion of rules" was in the next chapter, but Snape did indeed threaten him with St. Mungo's, if he didn't promise to obey them, and purely for Harry's own safety.  And yes, I think I was almost as upset about Hedwig dying as I was about . . . other people who figure prominently in my fic.  *sigh*  Consider it my small revenge, to have them here.

Title: Chapter 15 10 Aug 2007 5:25 am
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow i liked this chapter! Please update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I should have a new chapter out over the weekend.  Today, I'm working on Whelp.
Title: Chapter 15 10 Aug 2007 4:19 am
Reviewer: honore (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You are doing a lovely job with this, Looking forward to more. Thanks
Title: Chapter 15 10 Aug 2007 4:14 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Glad to see Harry working through all his problems one step at a time, even if lashing out at Severus is the way to get it done. He'll get better as time goes on, keep up the great work and update soon. LES

    Author's Response: Hi LES,  Yep, it's gonna be slow going for Harry, but he'll work through it, piece by piece.  I should have a new chappie out this weekend.  Today, Whelp!
Title: Chapter 15 10 Aug 2007 4:09 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how Harry still has some spirit left in him after everything that happened. In other stories I've read, he is just distraught over what happened but here, Harry still enjoys things like flying. And he yells at Snape, rather than being all subdued and quiet about everything. This is somewhat different than others I've read and I like that.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review!  Yeah, I didn't want to do unmitigated gloom, and I figrued that, since Harry has always had kind of a sh** life, but has always been able to take pleasure in some things (like flying) that he would still, here.  And Harry's a VERY angry person, as we saw in OotP, particularly.  When given an outlet, he'll go for it. 

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