and he was grateful. Probably. Deep down.-I love how you can always make me smile, even when Harry is depressed and Severus is worried. Severus did referee that quidditch match once so I guess I thought he would be a better flyer than he seems to be here.
Inspired last line! You're really good, y'know?
I sincerely hope you do get the next chapter up and soon. This is a truly well-written story, and I enjoy your characterization of Snape and Harry. I appreciate that you know the rules of the language. Keep on writing!
I hate cliffys but it's good to know you wont wait too long before updating again!
Author's Response: Nope, not too long. Later today (Monday) actually.
I suppose you're forgiven for the cliff-hanger, considering you update faster than any other author. lol. I especially loved the part from Harry's perspective. Nicely done :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I should have a new chapter out tomorrow. --rachel
oh my gosh, another cliffhanger. Very curious to see what happens and what Severus will say to Harry if he manages to be alright. Keep up the great work and please update soon. LES
Author's Response: Yeah, Sev is liable to be a tad put out. Update will be tomorrow. Thanks, LES! --rachel
| Title: Chapter 16
| 12 Aug 2007 10:13 pm
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| Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous)
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NOOOOOOOOO!!! WHAT A WAY TO END IT!!!!! please update soon!!!
*gets on hands and knees and begs*
PLEASE HAVE MERCYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!
Author's Response: Tomorrow, probably. I am merciful. ;-)
| Title: Chapter 16
| 12 Aug 2007 8:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous)
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OH dear, poor Severus
Author's Response: Indeed. :-)
Oh boy, this isn't good. This just isn't good. I loved the flying chapter. And the journal entry was funny. But this part isn't good. If Snape passed out WAY up there, where's Harry? No one can see them, so no one can save them. I hope Harry's ok and can save them both. But then I wouldn't want to be him when Snape woke up. I am so glad you're updating soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, Harry's pretty much in for it, no matter what happens. New chappie tomorow. Probably. Thanks for the review!
Lol, go Harry! I think. Lol. Poor Snape with his broom sickness and all. He sure puts up with a lot from Harry. I'm not entirely sure I'd possess so much patience myself, and to think this is the boy he's loathed for so long. Lol. I love it all. Can't wait for the next installment :)
Author's Response: Tomorrow. And yes, Harry and Sev will be "having words" about this little stunt, no worries. I can hardly kill off one of my main characters, can I? :-)
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