I love the way you can make Severus and Harry banter and make jokes so easily, it always seems to make me laugh.
I absolutly love Snape's demeanor and attitude towards everything Potter. For me, if any Snape/Harry fanfic were even plausible, yours would be possible. Keep writing and adding chapters! I need all the Potter I can get now that J.K. is finished with her story. However, yours is amazing! I love it! (The only thing is that the Remus/Snape relationship and interactions seem a little off-but I don't know what it is...sorry I can't be of more help.)
Author's Response: Hi pkrosche, thanks for the review! I'm not really sure what you mean by the Remus/Snape relationship being off, as they've not had much interaction onstage. Do you mean the way they talk about each other? Always open to suggestions, me . . .
| Title: Chapter 17
| 15 Aug 2007 1:28 am
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| Reviewer: xikum (Anonymous)
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I am so glad that Severus is OK, but I do wish that Harry would be able to come to terms enough to relax more at least with those who are close to him... and maybe talk with Lupin, who is such a dear, and would make a good confidant. Though, it seems, I would worry a bit about his reaction. I don't think he'd do anything without due consideration, at least, unlike Sirius.It feels as though neither Lupin, nor Harry, nor Severus have any really close family, and they ought to be gifted by creating their own chosen family between one another. They would be a stronger team than each alone, for instance, I tend to think also that the gantle Lupin would become even more formidable against the likes of Malfoy, and more committed to trying to get the werewolves against Voldie, given what had been done by them to his cub/packmate, so to speak.
This level, logical, consistent considerred behavior on the part of Severus is so beneficial for Harry - just what he needs right now, or really, what he should have had all along, but did not, given his relatives cruelty.
Author's Response: Absolutely! The three of them so desperately need others to care about besides themselves, and for others to care about them. More on that will have to wait for upcoming chapters, I'm afraid . . . :-)
Aww, yay!!! More to read!! Power is down at home, so here I am at work, trying to read everything I possibly can. I don't know if I've said this in a review, but you have a ton of insight into how people tend to react to severe trauma, both in this story and "Whelp." I have to wonder if you're studies or career is in counseling. Then again, I've come across these situations just in the course of my life. Anyways, you're an excellent writer, and keep it up!!
Author's Response: Hi kittykat, Yes, I did Master's work in Counselling (specifically with children) and did some volunteer work on a rape crisis hotline, and at a shelter for abused women and their children. Of course, this was about 15 years ago, but it never really goes away, you know? Thank you for your kind reviews, and I hope to have a new chapter for this story or Whelp (not sure which the muse will strike me with) out today. Hope your power comes back soon! --rachel
Glad to see Severus was able to keep his sense of humor about the situation, and I'm glad that he's alright. Looking forward to more Harry/Snape banter. Keep up the great work. LES
Author's Response: Yeah, I figure Snape's just had a bit of an awakening, or shock, of the "OMG I almost crash landed from 50000 feet" kind. He'll probably get over it. ;-) Thanks for the review!
Haha. "Good." I love your Snape. He's so classic. I'll admit I was confused about what had happened with the broom accident. I couldn't tell - at the end of the last chapter - if it was he or Harry that was falling, and then with this it took me awhile to figure out why he'd fallen in the first place *Shakes head*. Of course it all makes sense, lol. I was just not bright enough to see it at first.
Good job! Can't wait for more :)
Keira
Author's Response: I'm glad it all makes sense now . . . make sure to let me know if you need clarification, though. And thanks for the review!
That was an awesome chapter! I loved the race up, the race down, the trip up the steps, the magic without a wand, and especially the conversation after the fact. Really great storytelling!
Author's Response: Thanks! Harry's gonna need to get a wand pretty darn soon, though. Too many things could go wrong without it.
I'm so glad Harry's opened up a tiny bit!...I'm sure the near-death experience shocked him into realizing how much he trusts Snape. I like how you kind of juxtapose Severus and Remus to show how even though Harry cares for Lupin, he feels more comfortable around Snape. He doesn't want anyone to simply "put a bandaid" on his emotional problems, but rather appreciates the truth and acceptance he receives from Snape.
Maybe after this incident, Harry and Snape will realize how much they rely on each other and be able to heal even more.
Great job :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Jade! That juxtaposition was really what I was going for there. And also, how Lupin *says* he cares about Harry, but in many ways, Harry really *feels* the caring from Snape, who, despite the loathing they've often had for one another, has actually been there for him when it counted. I love Lupin , don't get me wrong, but sometimes, I feel like he needs a good kick to get him on track.
I really liked this chapter! I figured Snape wasn't going to die from the fall and it's nice to know that Harry managed to save him. I'm sure his arms are a bit sore though after heaving Snape around. Was there a little something extra in that potion Snape took? He was actually joking! That was a shoker but a nice one. Very nice chapter!
Author's Response: Madam Pomfrey has her ways, yes she does. But actually, in this case, I figured Sev's had a bit of a shock to the system and has let his guard down a bit. Don't worry; it wont last. ;-) Thanks for the review!
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