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Reviews For Walk the Shadows
I think it really describes the kind of person Snape is. He's unrelenting at times, but knows when to soften. I think Occlumency lessons will go SO much better if Snape gives Harry tools to help him master it...and possesses a little patience. lol. It'll be interesting to see how these lessons go. I loved this chapter. I think you're doing a really great job with the Harry's subtle, gradual progress. His slight relapses make it only seem more realistic. His vision/flashback made my heart ache, but you have a way of writing the emotional scenes without being graphic, and I think it takes real talent to do that. :) Can't wait 'til Thursday! Author's Response: Thanks, Jade! I honestly don't do graphic very well, and have always found that if left to the reader's imagination, all the blank spots will be filled in to each person's own comfort level, you know? And yes, the Occlumency lessons have always been a source of anguish for both these characters, but hopefully not too much so when I get through with them. ;-) |
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