That was a pretty good fit he had! I liked it; it was pretty intense. I like that Severus is making up that list too, lol. That cracks me up. I'd never get through an hour without saying Dunno, or Kinda, or any "faux compound words that end with a." I'm glad they got over the first hurdle of Harry's 'freak/punching bag/house-elf' days. Good to see him being forced to work through some issues. I wonder if he'll be getting another journal. He seemed to be doing a lot better with that.
Author's Response: There'll be journalling in the next chapter, never fear. :-) Thanks for the review!
Nice chapter! Its almost a shame Harry didn't get any hits in. It seems like Harry will always tell people he's 'fine' not matter how he feels. If only he knew what 'fine' stands for...
Author's Response: Eff'ed up Insecure Neurotic and Emotional! ;-)
Another great chapter. This one felt particularly intense. I can only imagine how intense some of your future chapters will be.
By the way, I have just recommended Walk the Shadows and Whelp on the AYLNO yahoo group and another yahoo group for HP recs.
Author's Response: Thanks, wynnleaf! Yeah, the intensity is gonna ratchet up from here.
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