What! That is . . . wow. I like that Severus wants to get guardianship of Harry but I'm not sure that it's the right time to say so. I feel like Harry will think Severus is taking him in as a duty. I don't think Harry will react well to this statement, but you do always surprise me.
Awww He's going to adopt him!
Yes! Yes! Yes! It's about time. **does a little happy dance**
| Title: Chapter 22
| 28 Sep 2007 9:29 pm
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| Reviewer: Nancy (Anonymous)
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This is the first time I've responded to online fanfiction, but I have to say this story really has me going! My only problem is I can't read the story straight through, even though additional chapters are posted, since I don't have a computer and have to go online at the public library!
I finished reading this chapter two days ago, and I'm only now able to comment on it. I'd been wondering which direction this Snape & Harry relationship would take (I didn't know how it was categorized, since I got involved with it as a featured story), and NOW it's becoming clearer. I don't mind a cliffhanger-- makes me keep wanting to get back to the story! I guess it's worse for readers who read to the last COMPLETED chapter and have to wait for the next one to be written!
Honestly, I almost DIDN'T start reading this one when I saw it wasn't completed; in the past, I've been gypped by writers who get so far, and then something happens which prevents them from finishing the story. I've pretty much sworn off starting stories-in-progress! But this one is worth the read, and I sincerely wish you the best in completing it!
I guess my main attraction thus far is Snape's actually being human enough to get beyond himself to reach out to Harry from the very beginning. As the chapters have unfolded, I've been extremely impressed with charcter development, especially Harry as he suffers and tries to heal from his personal horrors. I know this is generalized for the story as a whole, rather than being chapter-specific, but I'm really looking forward to seeing how the story continues to develop.
Well, all I can say is, I'm glad there's another chapter up already, because that's one evil cliffhanger!
:-)
Brilliant! *hands over her Butterfingers* I have enjoyed reading this story more than just about anything. I love the quick updates and wonderful writing. Keep it up!!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! *screams*
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! How could you just leave the chapter here??! AHHHHHH!!! Die, cliffies, die!!!
*ahem*
Um, sorry about that. I don't deal very well with killer cliffies like that. But anyway, I'm loving this story more and more as I read it! I abolutely LOVE the way you write Harry, and his reactions are so believable given what has happened to him ... one of the best things I love about this story is how everything is so realistic and believable, down to the details like the memory extraction. I love the way Snape and Harry interact, too. This is fast becoming one of my favorite fics of all time...
Anyway, I'll stop rambling now. Please please PLEASE update soon!
| Title: Chapter 22
| 24 Aug 2007 9:20 am
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| Reviewer: kyleigh (couldn't be bothered to sign in) (Anonymous)
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Gosh - I just love your screwed up Harry. He's entertaining. : ) Luv it. Eager for more.
| Title: Chapter 22
| 24 Aug 2007 8:12 am
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| Reviewer: JLAJ (Anonymous)
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Aaah! Cliffie! I just found this story of yours today (not sure how I missed it before, really) and I can't wait for the next chapter!
SNAPE IS MADE OF AWESOMESAUCE AND SO ARE YOU.
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