OH MY GOD I DID NOOOT SEE THAT COMING
MY POOR BABY HARRY GAHDHDHDJDI
I swore, literally swore the moment I read that someone dressed in black and silver came out of the floo, I was like "oh shit!" well, I am grateful to be reading this story after its complete, I don't think I would have been able to bear the suspense.
Hasn't it been more than an hour since they took the polyjuice and how did they get a polyjuice for a boy with the exact same dimensions as Harry so that he could get his clothes fitted correctly?
Yes, you really are a terrible, horrible, no good, very bad person. That scared ME for goodness' sake! Poor Harry!
I realize you wrote this some time ago. (Excellent chapter, by the way!)
I have merely a small correction to observe.
The possessive "thy" gets changed to "thine" when used before a word beginning with a vowel. (Same with "my" to "mine".)
So third sentence down AFTER Harry's journal entry, the sentence would more properly read, "Snape looked up, 'Know thyself and know thine enemy'."
(Think of "Mine eyes have seen the glory...")
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! As for the thy/thine: I knew it didn't sound right when I wrote it. Hmph. Thankfully, it's a quick fix. :) Hope you get a chance to finish the story and start the sequel!
I have to tell you -- I was eating my dinner while reading this, and whilst reading his journal entry, I started to laugh and dropped my plate on the floor. My poor dinner... But it's okay, I got more :)
And no, I did NOT see that coming, lol. Very very very interesting though. I really hope Harry doesn't relapse into a subconscious/unconscious state again. That would suck. For everyone involved, lol. But for he and Snape particularly.
Can't wait for the update :D
Oh man! How come you torture me yet I keep coming back? I'm jumping up and down with excitement, please hurry onto the next chapter!
Noooooo! Don't leave it at a place like that!! Please please please update again soon!
Author's Response: Okay, but only 'cause I love you guys so much. :-) So, I should have the next chappie out tonight . . . barring complete computer malfunction.
| Title: Chapter 29
| 12 Sep 2007 1:19 am
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| Reviewer: Lunaz (Anonymous)
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Okay sorry this is my third time trying to review and I lost both other fairly lengthy reviews because the numbers were too hard to match. But I really enjoyed the chapter and had to say at least that much. Poor Harry.
| Title: Chapter 29
| 11 Sep 2007 7:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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no, i really did not see that coming.:O:O:O
now you MUST update tomorrow, or tonight. or anytime in the next 48 hoyuurs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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