Poor Harry and Dumbledore. At first, I was afraid Harry was blind, when he was clawing at his eyes, and was relieved that he wasn't. I do feel bad for Dumbledore too, though, I know he needed to see it all as well. Perhaps not in the way that he did, but alas, Harry is most definitely not perfect, lol.
Can't wait for more :)
Keira
That was amazingly powerful, as was the rest of the story so far. It takes a hell of a lot for Albus to learn, doesn't it?
It's about time that the manipulative old bastard had a reality check. It certainly can't hurt for him to actually understand completely what is happening to his pawns.
I really, really loved this chapter! Snape is handling the situation pretty well, I think. After the last chapter, I was afraid he was just going to be too angry, and he was at first, when he didn't answer when Harry was calling him. But when he saw how badly affected Harry was, he calmed down a bit, and went to him. I think he may be understanding the extensive damage done to Harry better now.
I'm so glad Dumbledore was able to empathize with Harry, too, and feel compassion, not just react in anger. It's a good thing that he's not going to push Harry, but allow him the time he needs.
It really doesn't seem like Harry will be recovered enough to begin classes on time right now. Can you imagine how he'd react to Draco Malfoy? But if he isn't ready, I hope Harry won't see not meeting this goal as a failure, or if he does, that Snape will be able to help him realize that he's been hurt badly, and you can't put a time limit on the recovery process.
Looking forward to more!
Excellent decision to bring in Minerva to talk with Albus. I really think that helped bring out his sort of "epiphany" about Harry, much better than it he'd been talking to Snape. For Dumbledore to tell Minerva worked quite well and we get to see her taking it in, too.
Superb chapter.
Ok, I'm happy that Dumbledore realizes that Harry has gone through more than he expected and that he won't push Harry to improve, but don't you think you're a little too late, Dumbledore? Especially after this incident, there is no way that Harry is going to be able to go back to class on time. I'm glad that Dumbledore told Minerva everything that he saw/felt from Harry's memories. I relly hope that we get to see a scene where Harry opens up with Severus and tells him everything that has happened, maybe just then he can be helped easier. I'm grateful that Severus and Harry have the relationship they do, though which is made only more real by your excellent characterization with Dumbledore in this chapter too! It was perfect and I hope that he has truly learned his lesson--although I'm pretty sure Harry's made his point. Update before the weekend!
I've really, really, really enjoyed this chapter. I am of the opinion that Dumbledore gets a free pass way too often. I have to say that he gets his comeuppance in spades in this, and I'm petty enough to enjoy that immensely. Doesn't say too many nice things about me, but we all have our cross to bear :) I'm looking forward to more of the Snape/Harry dynamic, I like how Snape is still . . . . Snape.
| Title: Chapter 33
| 20 Sep 2007 3:26 pm
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| Reviewer: mamaduck (Anonymous)
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Well, Albus did deserve it didn't he, leaving his mental conduit open like that then stoking Harry's fire with callous words. Nicely done, I liked MInerva's part int his too.
Wow...you followed the event up perfectly. Of course Harry would be affected too...I didn't even think about his condition. Harry punishes himself more than anyone else could. I'm glad Severus is understanding. Will they work on controlling anger...or is that even possible?
It's odd how a weakened Dumbledore can make even a reader feel uncomfortable. It reminded me a bit of HBP where Dumbledore and Harry were trying to get the locket. You just always expect Dumbledore to be such a strong, static character.
So the memories Harry pushed into Dumbledore's mind were just of the Dursleys? Will we find out what he saw?
This was such an excellent chapter.
| Title: Chapter 33
| 20 Sep 2007 1:40 pm
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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Well done. Very tense and packed an emotional punch.
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