I think Severus is just a little, tiny bit jealous of Sirius. I wonder what Severus will start calling Harry now. I can't wait until school starts.
I really like the way you delineate Severus' feelings. I like your explanations of his understanding of Harry. Well done.
| Title: Chapter 34
| 11 Nov 2007 7:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Diego (Anonymous)
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This is so well written! If not for all the copy rights and such rot, you could really publish this!
(have you ever noticed how D-o-g father is coincidently G-o-d father backwards *is hit for stupidity*)
| Title: Chapter 34
| 24 Sep 2007 6:44 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I love when Harry goes, "But he didn't ever fight for me, not like you did." Great, great work. Thank you for posting this!
You are made of awesomness as well! This was a lovely addition to your story!
I've always loved the journal entries and this one takes the cake, for it is soo Harry that it's amazing! It's great to see what he feels about the stuff that's going on in his life while still being within the scope of characterization that J.K. set the perameters for. Snape in this chapter also gave me goosebumps, and it's so sweet how he's confused and unsure of his feelings but knows that he cares about Harry. I'm also glad to hear that Dumbledore has made a good recovery and that holds no ill will towards Harry. I just hope that Harry's able to at least try to attend classes--perhaps potions will be the first on his schedual...Can't wait for the next chapter!
I love this story. Everything about it, the humor, especially.
This line was great:
"Thank you, Harry," Snape said, and Harry goggled at him. A ‘thank you' and his first name? In the same sentence? They must be having a snowball fight in the seventh layer of hell about now.
**I had to laugh at that one.
I think it'd be really interesting to see a dueling session between Harry and Snape.
Also, the whole scene at the end where Snape replaced the book Harry had gotten from Sirius was subtle...and perfect...and I just wanted to hug my laptop screen.
I'm so excited to see what you've got in store for the next chapter :)
Wow these last chapters were a bit intense! I'm kinda glad Harry let Dumbledore feel all his pain. The meddling old man really needed a wake up call on the truth about Harry's life and that certainly did it for him. Keep up the wonderful work!!
I liked that, but I really want to know if Dumbledore really understands that he was pushing too hard.
| Title: Chapter 34
| 23 Sep 2007 2:07 am
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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I don't know why I was avoiding this fic. Something about the blurb made me think it wouldn't be my cuppa. Oh, yea! It was the mention of rape. Anyway, I was so bored (and running out of fic's to read) that I started it this afternoon. Six hours later and I'm hooked. What a nice blend of angst/humaness. Snape is slowly becoming human and Harry is slowly returning to humanity. I thought Snape's thoughts about the headmaster were right on target for the universe you created. When Harry sent Dumbledore all his memories so he truly could feel what Harry had been through, I was cheering my head off! I bet now they won't let Harry out into the school, but maybe bring bits into him. He really is growing up---and not the way the Headmaster wanted. I find it funny that he wanted to avoid the mistakes he made with Riddle by making the exact same mistakes! Isn't it funny, but Riddle's mother was probably a fetal alcahol-sydrome baby who was abused in her life and definitely suffering depression and deprivation while he was being gestated. His father was a spoiled rich kid. Harry's mother was relatively normal, but his father was a spoiled rich wizard. That and the fact that Riddle went right into an orphanage with possible serious neglect right after birth while Harry at that same age had 18 months with a loving family and they really were very much alike. Is it any wonder that Harry's power is manifesting in the stronger-dark areas!!! I hope you have lots of ideas to go with this fic. How can you keep up writing different stories???
| Title: Chapter 34
| 23 Sep 2007 12:53 am
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| Reviewer: honore (Anonymous)
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Excellent outcome here. Snape and Harry seem to be having a comfortable relationship-but school is starting hunh? Looking forward to more. Thanks
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