It's strange to see how much Harry has changed, I'm sure just three months ago Harry would have gone into a rage if Severus had corrected his papers. I hope there's a sequel, I really want to know how Harry will react to his friends and enemies.
You did a really good job depicting "normal" family life for Harry and Severus. Their emotions and responses are very believable. Great work!
I have to admit that those three words brough tears to my eyes faster than anything else I've read in this story.
For Harry to say "Hi, I'm home" was so powerfully moving. Chocolate frogs and Sherbet Lemon for everyone!
| Title: Chapter 35
| 29 Sep 2007 6:20 pm
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| Reviewer: jinx71 (Anonymous)
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What a great story. I've really enjoyed reading it. The development of Snape's and Harry's relationship has been amazing - I couldn't stop reading! I can't wait to read more and I would definitely love to read a sequel. Thanks for such a great story.
wow... i can't believe i didn't read this sooner. i admit, i had been avoiding it because the first two chapters didn't catch my attention when this story first came out. but then... well, i'm in love with and obsessed with your other stories and everybody talks about this one being so wonderful... so i had to give in and check it out for real.
i'm so glad i did. it's wonderful!
I'm saddened by the thought that this story is coming to an end, and I definitely would love a sequel.
It's nice to see the relationship blossoming between Severus and Harry. I love protective Severus, and I think he and Harry are very good for one another, which brings me to the next point--when Severus chuckled at something and Harry noticed how he'd been more relaxed lately. I'm sure it's a huge relief for him not to have to spy for Voldy any longer, but I believe that Harry is the main reason Severus is enjoying life a bit more. Severus has indeed done a great deal for Harry the past weeks, but Harry is giving him back something, too. Something more ephemereal, perhaps. But I think Severus will learn a lot about love and forgiveness and friendship from Harry.
It was great to see Harry and Remus getting along well again, too, and I'd love to see Harry and Dumbledore coming face to face again, and Harry meeting with his friends. A lot of people would be a bit awkward around someone who's suffered as Harry has, but I have faith in Ron and Hermione and their love for Harry.
And of course, I'd love to see lots more of Harry and Severus. Lots and lots more! So yes, I'm really hoping there's going to be a sequel!
| Title: Chapter 35
| 27 Sep 2007 10:53 pm
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| Reviewer: precissely (Anonymous)
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Oh, THANK YOU! And definitly yes for the sequel)))))))
| Title: Chapter 35
| 27 Sep 2007 9:41 am
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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What a sweet ending. I was expecting to see a blond after such a turnaround from the last chapter. When do we find out how Dumbles it taking it?
| Title: Chapter 35
| 27 Sep 2007 8:14 am
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| Reviewer: Pan (Anonymous)
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Of course we want a sequel. If you give a mouse a cookie...
OOH, a sequel - yes, definitely put me on the list voting for a sequel!!
This chapter was superb - Harry's last line made me squee in joy!! I am both nervous and cautiously optimistic about the beginning of the school year - I think it will probably be awful, both I'm hoping Harry will be able to face up to it - with Severus' help of course!!
I'm glad Harry had a chance to think about how he would respond to any tormenting and that he realized that he shouldn't really become like his enemies, but instead take the high road, which is a very very difficult, even challenging (Ha!) think to do!!
I'm also glad Harry that Harry is getting back on track with Remus, because I'm afraid he's going to need all the help he can get, and I'm a little worried about Ron and Hermione's reactions when they learn what Harry's been through - you seem to be foreshadowing that they'll still be Harry's friends (from the letters), but I think there's a lot of awkward moments coming between them all before things settle down again!!
Great chapter, as always!!
Scarlett
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