I think that Hermione's reaction, although pretty dramatic, was fine for her character. I remember that she cried after Harry had just yelled at them and had flung herself at him in pity, so nothing new here!
But, I bet Hermione is just going to search up PTSD anyways!
| Title: Chapter 42
| 25 Oct 2007 1:27 am
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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Oh I think Harry and the others should all go to Disney's Mouse. I can just see Snape standing there with a look of disgust on his face but doing it for Harry's sake. Awesome chapter. Love the whole scene of Severus talking to Hermione and Ron and Ron standing up to him.
There's a reason I keep that box of Kleenix on my computer desk....it's for chapters LIKE THIS! I was so feeling it all right along with Hermione, and heck...I already knew it had happened! But it shows what a great job you are doing at writing the characters emotions and keeping them true to themselves (because it is exactly how I thought Hermione would react). And Ron comforting her was a nice touch.
And Harry walking into the room and telling them "I am" (alright there with Snape) was touching. I had a feeling he was going to make an appearance during this talk. Snape handled it terrifically and I liked his and Harry's exchange at the end.
Wonderful reading.
Great job on this chapter, it was really cute the way that Severus told Harry that his friends could stay for dinner. I imagine it was hard to write, but I think it was really important for someone to explain what had happened to Harry. Great job with that, keep up the awesome work and please please update again soon. LES
Very good chapter! I really liked how Snape managed to not hex Ron for his rudeness last chapter. I would've been tempted especially since he kept interrupting. It was nice to see Ron comfort Hermione when she was distraught. Keep up the excellent writing and hopefully another chapter will be out as soon as your work stops making you work. :)
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