I truly sympathize with you about the difficulty of writing some chapters. Also, I am well past caring about my maths exam, I just dont care and am going with the flow of the story.
Oh, never have I regretted reading a particular story before. I am not able to study for my exan. Your story had captured me and is refusing to unhand me. If I fail in Mt Maths exam it would be entirely your fault.
Oh no! Harry didn't say he saw Hedwig dead, specifically. He said that there was silence after Vernon was done kicking. So, maybe Harry's accidental magic worked and opened Hedwigs cage and she flew away? Please?
We, I guess it would be safe to day thay Harry has cracked. Not the real one like the Longbottoms but rather the kind I am. I am happy that Harry is at least venting and Severus seems to have grown accustomed to it. By far my favourite chapter. Good job!
This has been one of my all-time favorite stories ever. It is extremely well-written, and I appreciated the amount of character development you had. Thanks for writing such a good one!
Just wondering, if Harry had gone long enough to die of starvation, how was he getting water?
Great story.
| Title: Chapter 43
| 16 Apr 2014 2:25 pm
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| Reviewer: KER (Anonymous)
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Just wanted to let you know I read this at work... much as you seem to have written quite a bit of it at work... It wasn't my intention, but I got so gripped by it I couldn't leave it alone. The whole story was beautifully crafted and perfectly written, and I loved every chapter of it. Sorry I've never commented before, but I just wanted to say 'Thank you'.
To be honest, I am a bit disappointed that only Harry got tortured. I think voldemort's anger at Severus would cause him to torture Severus first, to teach him a lesson. I also can't see Voldemort raping anyone.
Apart from that. I really like the idea of Severus helping Harry through this traumatic experience
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