This is definitely one of the most brilliant fics I have ever read. After reading it for the fourth time (I think), I decided to add it to my fanfiction favorites. Out of just over 4,000 fanfictions that I have read, its now one of the 11 that I recommend. Thank you so much for taking the time to write such a phenomenal fic, and giving us readers something to do.
Luffles,
Song
Best chapter yet! And they've all been good!
Wow. I pretty much read this entire thing in like, 3 days, what with school and all, but this is an amazing piece of fiction you've got going here. And now... on to the sequel!!!!!!!!!
You DO have a way with a last line! I LOVE your humor!
You do SUCH a good job making both Severus and Harry believable. You're quite a wonderful writer!
You did a really good job depicting "normal" family life for Harry and Severus. Their emotions and responses are very believable. Great work!
I really like the way you delineate Severus' feelings. I like your explanations of his understanding of Harry. Well done.
Well done, well done chapter, indeed.
Inspired last line! You're really good, y'know?
Thank you! for letting Severus save him.
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