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Reviews For Walk the Shadows
Title: Chapter 36 23 Jan 2013 10:14 pm
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Is Voldemort attacking Severus' mind while he's asleep? And why couldn't the order still get ministry information since the members are kept secret from the ministry?I can't believe Dumbledore considers half the things he does in relation to Harry. Thank you for another chapter, I hope Severus recovers soon.
Title: Chapter 35 23 Jan 2013 10:01 pm
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    It's strange to see how much Harry has changed, I'm sure just three months ago Harry would have gone into a rage if Severus had corrected his papers. I hope there's a sequel, I really want to know how Harry will react to his friends and enemies.
Title: Chapter 34 23 Jan 2013 2:58 pm
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I think Severus is just a little, tiny bit jealous of Sirius. I wonder what Severus will start calling Harry now. I can't wait until school starts.
Title: Chapter 33 23 Jan 2013 6:38 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that they're both alive but I don't think Harry would appreciate Dumbledore telling everyone what the Dursley's had done. Did Harry also show what had happened during his abduction?
Title: Chapter 32 23 Jan 2013 6:31 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Why doesn't Dumbledore have better mental defenses? And did Harry just show Dumbledore all of the pain Dumbledore had caused? It sucks that Severus and Harry can't just celebrate the new guardianship.
Title: Chapter 31 23 Jan 2013 6:22 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I can not imagine Snape ever saying 'prettified,' even in a sneer. Also, if Severus has a house elf then why couldn't he have just summoned Turner when they were being held prisoner? 'Our interactions are satisfactory'?! That is such a Severus type of reply.
Title: Chapter 30 23 Jan 2013 6:07 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't believe Lucius would want to make a scene and even talk about Voldemort in public especially since he had pleaded that he was under the imperius to get out of going to Azkaban in the past. I hope Severus comes up with a way for Harry to kill Voldemort without using an avada kedavra.
Title: Chapter 29 23 Jan 2013 5:57 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Hasn't it been more than an hour since they took the polyjuice and how did they get a polyjuice for a boy with the exact same dimensions as Harry so that he could get his clothes fitted correctly?
Title: Chapter 28 23 Jan 2013 5:47 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I love how great and conscientious Severus is with Harry and I hope Harry doesn't get too overwhelmed by Diagon Alley. Thank you for another amazing chapter :)
Title: Chapter 27 23 Jan 2013 5:34 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    It's awful how no one was ever really there for Harry, especially the people who said they were on his side, but why didn't the Weasley's check on Harry when they realized their care packages didn't get through?

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