That was an amazing pep talk, I'm not sure J.K Rowling could have written it better. I'm surprised that Harry is looking forward to talking to Remus because he had been avoiding pretty much everyone up to this point. I hope Harry reacts well to the attention.
I don't understand, is it weird to have your fears act like a storm? Or is it that Harry is doing so well at Occlumency or has Harry always had his fears hidden away? I'm glad that Harry is doing so well but I can't wait until school starts.
I don't know, I think that the '"I smell something foul, oh it's you, Potter" look' is my personal favorite. I can't wait to see how Harry will react when he has his first confrontation with Draco. By the way, is Draco for or against Voldemort and his father in this version? I hope he's against them and becomes an ally. Thank you for another chapter, I can't wait to read what's to come.
What is Severus taking points from when it's summer? I'm surprised that Severus just blurted out his intentions because I thought that he generally thinks out every possible scenario before saying anything. I'm also always surprised at how calm Harry becomes after having these episodes.
What! That is . . . wow. I like that Severus wants to get guardianship of Harry but I'm not sure that it's the right time to say so. I feel like Harry will think Severus is taking him in as a duty. I don't think Harry will react well to this statement, but you do always surprise me.
I'm glad that Harry is at least moving forward but I hope that when he returns to school he'll have new confidence and not regress. Thank you for another great chapter :)
Does Severus really think Harry hates him or that it was just a fit? The last scene was greta, thanks for another chapter.
"I mean that in the most non-points-taking way you can imagine", Snape was naturally giggly about dying, "Indeed." Snape's lip twitched again- I really don't know how you do it. You can bring humor into the most dire of situations. I also like that you show so much of what your characters are thinking rather than just showing the results of their thought processes.
I hope if Harry starts dealing with what's happened through his journals or talking to Severus soon.
I love the way you can make Severus and Harry banter and make jokes so easily, it always seems to make me laugh.
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