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Reviews For Walk the Shadows
Title: Chapter 16 22 Jan 2013 5:12 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    and he was grateful. Probably. Deep down.-I love how you can always make me smile, even when Harry is depressed and Severus is worried. Severus did referee that quidditch match once so I guess I thought he would be a better flyer than he seems to be here.
Title: Chapter 15 22 Jan 2013 5:05 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Why does Harry want to stay with Severus? I think Albus will break soon and tell people/someone where Harry is or what happened to him. Thank you for another chapter.
Title: Chapter 14 22 Jan 2013 4:54 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    That was great, I'm glad Severus had Harry talking and the offer to break his cup just topped everything off. I would do that all of the time if I cold do a repair spell.
Title: Chapter 13 22 Jan 2013 4:45 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I didn't expect that part to clear up so quickly for Harry but I hope that now he can deal with what has happened to him. I forgot to say that I loved this sentence, 'A lump Apparated into the middle of Harry's throat,' I never would have thought of it that way but I suppose you're just a genius writer.
Title: Chapter 12 22 Jan 2013 4:37 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I was already upset that Harry didn't remember the whole torture but then to find out that he's talking to Voldemort like a friend in his mind. That's almost more than I can handle from one chapter. I hope Harry will realize that the voice in his head is evil soon.
Title: Chapter 11 22 Jan 2013 4:28 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Is the voice Lilly? I was starting to think that Harry would be blind forever so I'm glad that's cleared up. I'm seriously worried about Harry though, I hope he has a conversation with Severus soon.
Title: Chapter 10 22 Jan 2013 4:19 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I"m surprised at how well Harry reacted to Severus and at how much guilt Severus feels because at the time it had felt like the only option.
Title: Chapter 9 22 Jan 2013 4:12 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Why does Harry think he deserves the pain? It's terrible that Harry thinks he's to blame for anything and why doesn't Voldemort torture Severus when he wakes up? It's awful what Harry has to suffer through but I'm glad they finally got out.
Title: Chapter 8 22 Jan 2013 3:28 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    WHAT'S THE PLAN? It surprised me that Harry gave up so much about Ron and Hermione and that Harry never got over Ron's earlier jealousy. But seriously I need to know, what's the plan? I hope they aren't caught because that would be awful.
Title: Chapter 7 22 Jan 2013 3:15 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Was that Severus or Harry saying that they needed to leave ASAP? Because it may have been an exaggeration coming from Harry or it may have been a dire urgency coming from Severus. Dogfather- that's a good one, I have no idea how you come up with these lines but please keep it up.

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