oh my gosh, another cliffhanger. Very curious to see what happens and what Severus will say to Harry if he manages to be alright. Keep up the great work and please update soon. LES
Author's Response: Yeah, Sev is liable to be a tad put out. Update will be tomorrow. Thanks, LES! --rachel
| Title: Chapter 16
| 12 Aug 2007 10:13 pm
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| Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous)
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NOOOOOOOOO!!! WHAT A WAY TO END IT!!!!! please update soon!!!
*gets on hands and knees and begs*
PLEASE HAVE MERCYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!
Author's Response: Tomorrow, probably. I am merciful. ;-)
| Title: Chapter 16
| 12 Aug 2007 8:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous)
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OH dear, poor Severus
Author's Response: Indeed. :-)
Oh boy, this isn't good. This just isn't good. I loved the flying chapter. And the journal entry was funny. But this part isn't good. If Snape passed out WAY up there, where's Harry? No one can see them, so no one can save them. I hope Harry's ok and can save them both. But then I wouldn't want to be him when Snape woke up. I am so glad you're updating soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, Harry's pretty much in for it, no matter what happens. New chappie tomorow. Probably. Thanks for the review!
Lol, go Harry! I think. Lol. Poor Snape with his broom sickness and all. He sure puts up with a lot from Harry. I'm not entirely sure I'd possess so much patience myself, and to think this is the boy he's loathed for so long. Lol. I love it all. Can't wait for the next installment :)
Author's Response: Tomorrow. And yes, Harry and Sev will be "having words" about this little stunt, no worries. I can hardly kill off one of my main characters, can I? :-)
Whoo! Awesome. I liked the bath scene, and how Snape laid clean clothes out for him, but only gave him directions to them. He didn't bring them to him, or help him too much- he let Harry work for them a little. That's good. Good descriptions in this chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for your reviews, Jan! After chapter nine, it's pretty much all recovery for Harry.
Ack! That is terrifying! Fantastic way to end the chapter.
Wow! Great chapter! Wow, poor Harry! that was horrible! I feel a little sick...
Whoo! I loved the mention of the baby monitor spell. Cute. So now they have some sort of understanding... hmm..
Great chapter. You almost had me crying at several different parts, starting with Harry talking about Hedwig. I'm glad Snape can understand how important Hedwig was to Harry.
It seems like Harry and Snape still have quite a long road ahead of them. It definitely seems to be a 'two steps forward, three steps back' sort of process. Pretty realistic.
Anyway, thanks for the update. I will be gone to camp for the next week, so I'm sure I'll have a few chapters of this and your other story to read when I get back. Can't wait.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review, curlybean! Yes, Harry's recovery isn't linear by any stretch. And Sev, well, we'll have more on his own background in later chapters. should have a new chapter out today or tomorrow. Have fun at camp!
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