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Reviews For Walk the Shadows
Title: Chapter 14 08 Aug 2007 8:39 am
Reviewer: Shellie (Signed) [Report This]
    You are doing an excellent job of showing that recovery is not a fast process. I think my favorite bit is Snape telling him to at least drink his tea before he tosses his cup. lol I am happy with the frequent updates for both of your stories as well as the quality of writing.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, Harry's going to be dealing with this for a long time.  The rest of his life, really, though I doubt I'll cover that much time in this fic.  ;-)
Title: Chapter 14 08 Aug 2007 8:28 am
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    I was so excited to see Remus. I love how he seemed so protective of Harry and how Albus was actually a bit scared of him. I think a protective Remus is so sweet.

    That last bit with Snape asking Harry if he wanted to throw the cup was sad and funny at the same time. Poor Harry is just a mess, and Snape is right to let him play out his frustrations, even if it means he has to buy new dinnerware when it's all over.

    Anyway, can't wait for the next update. Thanks.....

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Snape doesn't really have to buy dinnerware -- he can just repair the smashed bits, 'cause magic is kewl.  :-) -- but it's the thought that counts!
Title: Chapter 14 08 Aug 2007 6:23 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter! I loved how they were working through Harry's issues. Realy effective, too, I'd imagine.

    Author's Response: Thanks! 
Title: Chapter 14 08 Aug 2007 6:16 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape's matter-of-fact response to Harry's tantrum was well done. And Harry's acceptance of the fact that Snape is letting him vent -- that worked well, too. Also excellent was Snape inexorably leading Harry to voice the things that have been done to him, like he's making him take ownership of it -- as in "this really happened to me" instead of just pushing it away. I thought this was one of your best chapters because much of what is going on is fairly subtle.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I figure Snape can be kind of a subtle guy . . . but he also understands the need for some controlled violence in response to things that feel out of control.
Title: Chapter 14 08 Aug 2007 4:58 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the fact that Snape is allowing Harry to throw these tantrums in order to release his pent-up anger... Stopping him would only make things worse, I imagine. Hopefully he eventually chills out, although for some reason, I like it when Harry loses it...like in OotP after Sirius's death. Makes no sense, I know...lol. He's always been a character I (and millions of others) can relate to extremely well, and I think you've carried that into this story.

    Excellent chapter! One of my favorites, actually.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  With everything that happens to Harry (and I mean, in the books, not even in my dire fictional accounts) I'm rather surprised he doesn't have more tantrums where he breaks all kinds of stuff.  I mean, OotP, he was angry pretty much all the time, and talked back a lot, which was one way of dealing with it, but he has such a wonderful capacity for out and out destruction!  ;-)
Title: Chapter 14 08 Aug 2007 4:21 am
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter!!!! Hope you can update soon!!! What's a Kudo???

    Author's Response: Thanks!  A Kudos are . . . accolades . . . or chocolate covered granola bars.  You choose.  ;-)
Title: Chapter 14 08 Aug 2007 3:11 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love these constant updates! Do you really love writing or something? I loved the ending with Snape basically telling Harry to break the cup to make himself feel better.

    Author's Response: Uh-huh, I thought it'd be good for him . . . therapeutically.  Breaking things is good for what ails you.  :-)  And yeah, I do love writing!  Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 13 07 Aug 2007 6:18 am
Reviewer: xikum (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank the gods for that - Severus helped Harry rid the DL from his mind. Now, maybe, they can start to have a more positive relationship?!

    Author's Response: Yep!  Positive as the Dickens.  It will be easier for a time, for the two of them, but difficult times still lie ahead . . .  Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 13 07 Aug 2007 4:43 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great intense chapter with the battle over Harry's mind.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  I should have a new chapter out tomorrow.

Title: Chapter 13 06 Aug 2007 12:41 pm
Reviewer: Bek78 (Signed) [Report This]
    I am loving this story. Thanks so much for sharing.

    Author's Response: Thank you for reading!  I should have a new chapter by Wednesday. ---Rachel

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