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Reviews For Walk the Shadows
Title: Chapter 10 02 Aug 2007 3:09 am
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very emotional chapter. Poor Harry. Very well done.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 10 02 Aug 2007 2:50 am
Reviewer: Jen77 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hidden? And who better to lead him out of darkness than a man who has travelled both light and dark.

    Author's Response: Indeed.  :-)
Title: Chapter 10 01 Aug 2007 8:43 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter! I liked how the end part was told from Harry's POV and what he was feeling. Keep up the great writing!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 10 01 Aug 2007 8:29 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I think you've depicted the internal suffering of an abused boy just brilliantly. As I read this chapter, I felt so incredibly sad for Harry, but I also took comfort in knowing that he'll finally have someone to help him heal. Does that make sense?

    I can't wait to see where you take this story. Its intensity is addicting, and I think you have a real talent for expressing human emotion in words.

    Excellent chapter, as always :)

    Author's Response:

    Does that make sense?

    Absolutely!  I think a big part of the hurt/comfort cycle is for the reader to get a big part of the comfort, often well before the characters in the story experience it.

    I very much appreciate your kind words, and hope to continue to live up to them.  :-)

Title: Chapter 10 01 Aug 2007 8:09 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellently written. Nothing trivialized, nothing overdone. I'll definately be back every time there's an update. It's a really good story.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm working on the next chapter now, so it should be up by tomorrow.
Title: Chapter 9 31 Jul 2007 10:28 pm
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    GAH. I read your other story last night and decided to give this one a go as well. Man. I'm glad to see they're away from Topsham Manor, but all the same... Good Lord, what a thing to go through.

    I hope to see more soon - hope Harry gets all his sight back, and that Severus isn't punished too badly for his true allegiances. :(

    Great job as always,

    Keira
Title: Chapter 9 31 Jul 2007 9:50 pm
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!! Hope you can update soon!!!!!!!!!
Title: Chapter 9 31 Jul 2007 8:24 pm
Reviewer: kat (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was utterly chilling... I hope that Harry has a chance to recover!
    Oh, and a quick thanks for involving McGonagall - I love her character, but she's very underused. Could you have some McGonagall-Harry bonding, please? If not, that's okay. :) Eagerly awaiting the next installment!
Title: Chapter 9 31 Jul 2007 4:24 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I have to admit, I was a little nervous about the torture/rape warning, but I think you pulled it off brilliantly. The last couple paragraphs almost made me rejoice outloud (and I'm sitting here at work. lol).

    Poor Harry...I have a feeling he'll be extremely affected by what happened. I hope he's able to recover.

    Anyway, great chapter! *waits eagerly for Thursday ;)*

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review!  Yeah, the next few chapters are going to be really angsty and full of the repercussions of what I've put the poor kid through.  Oh, and Snape being all human and stuff.  ;-)

    I debated with myself for a long time about whether to include the rape, and had a really hard time actually writing the chapter, in truth.  But I figured in the long run, I was all about the angst, and it would give Snape more of a chance to be self-flagellatory, 'cause he's the one that came up with the plan that failed so spectacularly.  Thanks again for the feedback!  Till Thursday. . . .

Title: Chapter 9 31 Jul 2007 3:07 pm
Reviewer: mel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    WOW!! Exchursday

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