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Reviews For Walk the Shadows
Title: Chapter 9 31 Jul 2007 8:02 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, that was intense, frightening, horrible, and all manner of adjectives I'm too stunned to remember. I'm so glad you got them out of there. I love that McGonagall was the hero. She's always been one of my very favorites and has been grossly under utilized. Poor Harry. I really hope he can begin healing now. Good show! I can't wait for the next update.

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I've always thought McGonagall was way under utilized, too, especially given she's one of only, what, a half dozen registered Animagi?  And yes, now the healing can begin!
Title: Chapter 9 31 Jul 2007 7:51 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG! That was an intense chapter! Of course things would have to go wrong in thier plans but at least they both made it out finally. I wasn't expecting McGonagall to appear like that but I'm glad she got Snape out of there. Please update again soon!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review!  This was one of the hardest chapters to write for me, ever, and I have a tendency to be very mean to characters, so that's saying something. The next few chapters will be mostly Harry coming to terms with what has happened, both with regards to his sight, and with the torture he underwent. 

     And I really like McGonagall, so I figured to give her a chance to shine.  :-)

Title: Chapter 8 30 Jul 2007 12:09 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Can't recall if/when I've reviewed. I am really enjoying both of your stories. Don't know how you're keeping up with two at once, but they are both great, IC reads.
Title: Chapter 8 28 Jul 2007 8:45 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I loved the part where Snape was holding Harry while he was screaming from witnessing Bellatrix under the Cruciatus curse.

    I'm also glad to see that Harry is letting Snape help take care of him...at least a little bit.

    I can't wait for the next update to see how they plan to escape!
Title: Chapter 8 28 Jul 2007 5:39 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! They're finally escaping! Hopefully all will go well! Great chapter!
Title: Chapter 8 28 Jul 2007 4:45 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! Snark... er... Snape has a plan! He was actually kind of decent to Harry in this one. Not too good too soon, though. I like how they're getting along. Very believable. Now get them out of there and fix Harry's eyes!

    Author's Response: Aw, man! You thought he was decent??  I'm gonna have to upload some serious snark for him in the next chappie!  Thanks, though.  I'm trying to keep everyone IC as much as possible, and only change the plot.  Glad to see it's mostly working.  :-)
Title: Chapter 8 28 Jul 2007 4:14 am
Reviewer: MinervaM (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story - thanks for sharing it with us and keep up the good work!
Title: Chapter 8 28 Jul 2007 12:45 am
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    A great chapter. It really finds middle ground between Harry being a sulking dead weight and possibly starting to fight for his life again.

    And... ESCAPE! Finally. That's the part I'm waiting for. Not that them being stuck together isn't great and all, but I think Harry could use about half a dozen potions for his various ailments right about now. :-)
Title: Chapter 7 26 Jul 2007 11:37 pm
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chap! Please update soon!!!

    Author's Response: Your wish, etc., etc . .  .  Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 7 26 Jul 2007 3:35 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Snap out of it, Harry! I hope he comes to his senses soon; although, if I were Harry, I'd have a hard time coping with everything too...poor kid.

    That said, I am thoroughly enjoying this story. Can't wait for more :)

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review!  Yeah, part of my plan for this story is to get across the ways in which Harry's life up to now have affected him, especially on a psychological level.  He's mighty resilient, and yet, still so lonely and unloved feeling.  A huge dichotomy that I want to explore more.

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