Cats are quite the task masters, aren't they? I had one that was very much a vocalist critique, if you sang just SLIGHTLY off key she hushed you up with a paw, and my other cat would scowl at me if I interupted reading to him by laughing at the story...
I assume Harry's wand was in Dumbledore's pocket, does he get this one back or am I wrong? I felt this one was special. Severus should let Harry have a dog. It doesn't need to be a puppy, I prefer adult dogs better anyway, and if it were a magical one, maybe it could assist him... sorry, tangeant. I'm sure you'll write everything wonderfully as you have been so I have no concerns.
That was amazing! the fight, the rescue, everything. Oh and calmly stepping over a werewolf was hilarious to me considering who it was
Hmm, he's learned quite the defence, eh? Hehehe, oh and the bit about Remus being a pet dog was cute. I wanted to scratch his ears.
A slightly stupid cow? Most of them are at least SLIGHTLY stupid. My grandpa's are the most intelligent ones I, or anyone I know, have come upon and really their smarts only seem to arrive when they are giving birth. They aren't as bad as sheep though.
Oh and I loved Hagrid and I always hoped Umbridge was never found.
I also like how you imply that someone has researched the nutritious value of fingernails. All I can say is they are high in dead keritin.
Oh, Hedwig? No, no, she shouldn't die, she should have been set to Ron's. Animals shouldn't be hurt, no.
"But finish the tea, first, if you would." Sorry that struck me as funny. The rest of the chapter was just sad. Not your writing of it, of course, but the happenings. So sad.
I feel the need to tell you the victory dance last chapter was for their escape; I'm not sadistic to the good guys...
YESSSS! *butt-wiggle victory dance*
Beautifully written. Well done. I love it!
| Title: Chapter 31
| 30 Jan 2010 1:12 am
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| Reviewer: malimed (Anonymous)
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"our interactions are satisfactory."
best. line. ever.
it kind of makes me feel like spock is raising harry. very unemotional. but also very snape.
great work!
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