| Title: Chapter 24
| 22 Jan 2010 5:31 am
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| Reviewer: Person (Anonymous)
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YAY! Chocolate frosted sugar bombs! I love calvin and hobbes! You just about made me jump for joy when you said that! You're the best!
| Title: Chapter 33
| 28 Jul 2009 7:56 am
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| Reviewer: lastcrazyhorn (Anonymous)
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Just wanted to say thanks for knowing the difference between "scared" and "scarred."
| Title: Chapter 20
| 28 Jul 2009 6:42 am
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| Reviewer: lastcrazyhorn (Anonymous)
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I just snorted out loud . . .
"Okay. You can't say 'arrogant' anymore, then."
Severus added it to the list. "Neither of us can. Also, no 'whatever,' 'freak,' or," he shuddered, "'dunno.' Despicable word, that."
| Title: Chapter 14
| 28 Jul 2009 6:08 am
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| Reviewer: lastcrazyhorn (Anonymous)
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*giggles inanely*
"Do you wish to break the cup, Harry?"
His fingers tightened on it, of their own accord. He could imagine, quite clearly, hurling the stupid piece of stupid pottery right at the wall and seeing it shatter into a million stupid, sodding, sharp, glorious pieces. It would be brilliant. "Yes, sir."
"Very well." Snape gave an almost inaudible sigh. "But finish the tea, first, if you would."
| Title: Chapter 43
| 11 Feb 2009 7:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Prison-Door (Anonymous)
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I've read this story probably 5 or 6 times now and it never ceases to amaze me. It's almost a pity that it's fanfiction, because you've got something incredible here, as well as massive amounts of talent. It’s such a pleasure to read your work.
Yes, you really are a terrible, horrible, no good, very bad person. That scared ME for goodness' sake! Poor Harry!
I loved this story! It had a very in depth plot that pulled me in and I couldn't stop reading until I'd finished. Congrats on a story well written.
I realize you wrote this some time ago. (Excellent chapter, by the way!)
I have merely a small correction to observe.
The possessive "thy" gets changed to "thine" when used before a word beginning with a vowel. (Same with "my" to "mine".)
So third sentence down AFTER Harry's journal entry, the sentence would more properly read, "Snape looked up, 'Know thyself and know thine enemy'."
(Think of "Mine eyes have seen the glory...")
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! As for the thy/thine: I knew it didn't sound right when I wrote it. Hmph. Thankfully, it's a quick fix. :) Hope you get a chance to finish the story and start the sequel!
| Title: Chapter 11
| 05 Oct 2008 12:39 am
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| Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous)
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Now I *am* crying, dang it. That last part in Harry's perspective was heartbreaking.
Author's Response: Thank you for your reviews! I hope you get a chance to finish the story, and read the sequel, too, which is about half done at this point.
| Title: Chapter 10
| 05 Oct 2008 12:34 am
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| Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous)
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I'm almost crying. That was so horrible...so horrible!...but so incredibly well-done. Kudos to you for being willing to write such a hard-hitting story.
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