Oh great chappie. I can't believe Ron could be that cruel, but I guess he's traumatised over Harry.
Poor Harry. He's really having a rough time of it, isn't he?
CAn't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: If Neville had been the one to confront him, Ron might not have freaked out so badly. Being confronted by Malfoy really locked him into confrontational mode and all he sees is his friends are siding with Malfoy. He didn't exactly set out to be a bully, though. He did try to calm Noah down in other ways, progressing (presumably) from being nice to bribery to threats to emotional abuse, which isn't too uncommon for people who don't know how to deal with a crying child. But, yes, I am just using this to show Ron and Hermione falling apart over Harry's "death". Ron seems more the type to go around blowing up at people and being moody and angry, than to talk about his feelings and cry. Picking on a "failed" Gryffindor also seems appropriate, since Ron must be feeling like a failed Gryffindor himself (he wasn't even present for the final battle). People often bully someone over things that they secretly have in common.
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Poor Harry! I can't imagine what he's going through. I wonder if that's Snape…
Wow, really interesting start. I look forward to more!
Oh my. They all have to be sorted into Slytherin and want to be sorted there as well. There will be trouble with Padfoot over that one. The three of them may be stuck in that room until they turn seventeen.
hmmm interesdting sev may have done something but what....
Ouuu, Snape is so sneeky. Love it! I love reading the scenes where Snape is. Muah ha, of course Professor McGonagall can still dish it out to the boys. Loved it. Thanks for the chapter!
Oh Sirius, you make me want to smack you! You did an amazing job making him seem juvenile and in character as a younger Sirius. Love your Snape!
I love this story so much! I was so glad that it was updated. Harry's thoughts did make me wonder if Snape was making Sirius forget. it would make things easier, perhaps for all of them. I hope that some things happen that force the boys to behave and get closer. Thanks so much for the update!!
No wonder Snape was so unhappy. Sirius isn't going to make this easy for him. It will be interesting to see how Harry and Remus make him tow the line.
| Title: Chapter 11
| 16 May 2012 5:32 am
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| Reviewer: Lia (Signed)
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I suppose Sirius is lashing out at them because of the situation they find themselves in. I dont think he was quite that bad the first time round though I am sure that as far as homework was concerned, he had aways been the same.
Harry seems to be scared and mellowed down mostly. His own experience with Ron and Hermione was a lot different than the experience with Remus and Sirius.
Well, let's see what happens next.
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