Good chapter.... I keep expecting Harry to lash out at Sirius. Because Sirius is really pushing it. Loved it!:)
Good story so far. Can't wait to read more.
This is a wonderfully unique Post-Voldemort story! It was nothing like I expected it to be and I was drawn in from the very first chapter. I thought that the characterization was extremely well done, and the plotline very believable in the context of the changes in Wizarding society that you are showing.
I find myself alternately feeling sorry for Sirius and wanting to shake him. I think that I can empathize with Snape somewhat although, since the POV is strictly from Harry's perspective, we never get into his head. Good job on the consistency of the POV. I didn't see a single instance of "head-hopping". The detailing of the settings are very good; there's a good sense of "atmosphere". This feels like the Wizarding World as when I read the original series.
I'm very much looking forward to your next update. I'm going to put this in my favorites (once I figure out how to do so! LOL!), and will be checking back frequently to re-read and look for new chapters.
Well done!
LOL!
I've put a number of characters in Hufflepuff, for that very reason. In 2004, the lj community hp100 ran a Sorting challenge, and I landed at least Ron and Crabbe and Goyle there. :-)
Good chapter! Amusing how Harry had to talk the Hat IN to putting him in Slytherin, this time. I guess he's not desperate to prove himself, anymore. (Been there; done that....)
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| 15 Apr 2010 12:45 pm
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Great chapter poor pudifoot but what a break for Hufflepuff they would never have survived!
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| 07 Jan 2010 6:10 pm
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Great story thank you so much again they are all in character and behaving as they would in the AU world
AND it'd serve Sirius right if they let him go alone to Gryffindor, the git.
So Harry is still his usual age, in a child's body?
This story is great. It does sound a little familiar. Maybe I did start to read it long ago, in any case, hopefully you'll continue updating all of your stories soon. ;)
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