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Title: Chapter 6 05 Jan 2008 8:31 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very original story! I'm enjoying it tremendously! It's a lot of fun to see them all, Sirius especially, as little kids. It'll be interesting to see if Snape and Sirius can forge a better relationship eventually. I really feel for all of them, Snape included. It's a very tough position they're in.

    On the plus side, after being around young Sirius, maybe Snape will see that Harry really isn't so bad, after all.

    I don't envy Harry having to tell Sirius they've got to be in Slytherin, though. Remus may not be happy, but I think he can accept it under the circumstances. Sirius, though...well, like I said, I don't envy Harry!
Title: Chapter 6 05 Jan 2008 7:15 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! I'm glad you found time to update this and I hope you can again soon!
Title: Chapter 6 05 Jan 2008 12:50 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    What a great update!! Wow. I love this universe and the story unfolding. Harry, Sirius and Remus in Slytherin? Sirius is about to blow up, I know it. Wow. I love dthe little hidey hole they found after their library trip. I wish that they would do more innocently, dangerous things though, like climbing up the bookcases in the library and walking along the tops or something - but wait, am I confusing it with a game? Hehe. Well this was an awesome update. I have been missing your fic for a very long time. All of them actually. Thanks for posting more! I look forward to the next.

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you enjoyed this one. I tried to put more Snape in it to compensate for so much Harry, Remus, and Sirius.

    I feel sorry for Harry, saddled with Mission Impossible. I mean, honestly, how would YOU like to tell Sirius that he has to be in Slytherin? Especially when you're locked in a room with him!

    Oh, I'm sure they'll "innocently" stumble into danger sooner or later. Harry's a magnet for trouble, after all.

Title: Chapter 5 18 Sep 2007 2:36 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope you update this story soon, because I really want the next chapter.
Title: Chapter 5 17 Sep 2007 10:46 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Are you going to post an update soon, or am I going to have to cry miserably in loss? :P

    I love this fic and you are torturing meeeee.... :) I hope that there will be more soon! But I know I have no right to ask it considering the update status of my own fics...
Title: Chapter 3 16 Aug 2007 2:39 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is amazingly written. I don't feel confused, even though I have no idea what is happening. I know I'll get the answers and the atmosphere of this story comes through so strongly.
Title: Chapter 1 16 Aug 2007 2:05 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Whoa. That was nicely weird. You got the feeling of desperation and despair across very well. I'm intrigued.
Title: Chapter 5 13 Aug 2007 1:46 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I love how immature Sirius is being, making faces... It's really interesting, and it's not that hard to picture that he might not have grown up before.

    Poor Harry and his letters! it must be hard to have them, and think of his friends and what they must go through now that he's 'dead'.

    "Sirius was holding a Muggle-style lighter." Cool! And so Sirius-like, even at 10 years old!

    Missing quotation here: "I'm sorry, Sirius repeated. "You don't have to --"

    I liked this: "He got a cuff on his ear for his trouble, and howled with pain, clasping both hands over the side of his head." Good way to show his new age! It makes it a lot more real. Sometimes he acts like an adult, like when he was talking to Harry, but this also shows that he's a kid now. good job! I wonder if maybe his ears are super sensitive?

    Little Lupin is great! I love how he still talks all grown up, and matter of fact, explaining things. I get a kick of imagining that coming out of the mouth of a ten year old! LOL!

    Haha! Sirius has to call Snape "Sir"! I love it! LOL, him trying to say "Snivellus" and it coming out Sir! haha!

    "Oh, no, Harry though. He knew exactly what Sirius was getting at." Thought

    Wow, great chapter. I really enjoyed it. Sirius is such a fun character! I love how he almost flung himself out of a window to see the view, or something. So in character, fantastic job! I really enjoyed the ending too, with the nightmares. I was picturing what it would be like if harry HAD thrown up, and Sirius was still screaming when Snape barged in. Haha! That would have been hilarious! He probably wouldn't have known what to do- or would he? He was a head of house for years...

    Are all the visitors at Hogwarts staying in the four houses?

    Draco Malfoy- Hmm... I don't know. It could be fun to see him later, interacting with Harry again once or twice, dropping by unexpectantly, but I'm not attached to the character in this story.

    Thanks for the update! It was GREAT! Hurray for your "sudden inexplicable enjoyment of kidfic"!!!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, and then not even being able to *read* his letters, because of no privacy.

    I'm glad you liked the lighter. I think Sirius is going to be on the lookout for things he can replace magic with now that he can't use it. And... this is the guy with the flying motorbike, after all.

    Thank you for the corrections. I definitely need to proof-read more carefully (last chapter had a few typos, too, that I only noticed after I posted it), and not try to proof-read in the middle of the night. :-)

    Remus is kind of silly. He's so worried that Harry or Sirius will give them away, but I'm pretty sure anyone listening in to their conversations would be more curious about a little kid speaking like an adult than a kid ranting about a mean teacher or something.

    We might see some of the people staying at Hogwarts later on. For now they're just there to provide some background. The injured are in the infirmary, of course, and anyone else would be staying... wherever there's room available. So, yes, certainly in the dormitories, since those would be already set up with beds and things like that. Probably not Gryffindor or Ravenclaw, since everything on that floor seems to be locked up, and it's a bit far from the main areas of the castle.

    Thank you for your lovely reviews! 

Title: Chapter 5 13 Aug 2007 8:35 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter answered some of my long awaited questions! :)

    Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that. :-)
Title: Chapter 5 13 Aug 2007 1:17 am
Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very interesting.

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