Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Halloween 20 Apr 2021 3:45 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very satisfactory thank you
Title: Sirius and Remus 20 Apr 2021 3:31 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you an interesting story
Title: Prologue 19 Apr 2021 9:23 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you an interesting start
Title: Epilogue 13 Feb 2013 6:12 am
Reviewer: Zaiferz (Signed) [Report This]
    im so confused on how the ending works..i mean i get it! i do..but at the same tiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiime....... lol

    goood work it was great.
Title: Epilogue 01 Sep 2008 1:47 am
Reviewer: Ripuku (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, that was so sweet of Sevvie to do for them. Harry was so cute and his baby talk was so adorable :3
Title: Epilogue 29 Jan 2008 6:18 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I forgot to mention that when chapters are rewritten, I usually reread them and rate them again, as long as I am aware of them. I think that this would be a perfect opportunity to promote this particular story! If you decide to, once you change the summary, redo some of the chapters and get it beta'd again, we can post about it on the groups. I think that your rating will creep up higher. :) It'll be good.
Title: Epilogue 29 Jan 2008 6:13 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, also: Move the "Completely AU. Pairings: Lily/James, Albus/Minerva.
    Beta-ed by Breannatala :-) " in the summary to the story notes area on the table of contents. That's more like important info, than part of the summary. :) Usually such info like that is only given as a sort of warning, but I don't think you should keep yours there.
Title: Epilogue 29 Jan 2008 6:11 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Here is your summary:

    When Harry is found at his relatives, beaten and injured, it is more than potions and magic can heal. Snape decides to try something truly extraordinary to give Harry the childhood he deserves.

    A time travel story.

    --

    You should go back and add in more scenes with Harry and Snape in the earliest chapters, make it more apparent just how unhappy and hurt Harry is. Plus, it will add more Snape and Harry interaction which is what anyone on this site craves. :D Good job with this story - was it your first? Congratulations on completing a multichapered one. It's more than I have done.
Title: Epilogue 29 Jan 2008 6:10 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwww!!! What a great ending! That was so good, it made me smile broadly. It was a little short, but it was good. I'm so happy that Lily and James, and Harry are all so happy. I was also happy to see that James didn't fall prey to the DADA curse! I wondered if he would and if Snape would get the girl, but I liked this. I guess with Voldemort's death, the curse he put on the position was killed as well. :)
Title: Halloween 29 Jan 2008 6:07 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    You might want to mention the veritaserum first thing. I feel lost and bewildered without knowing why Peter is answering their questions so calmly.

    WOW! So Severus is Imperioing Peter?! WOW! I so did not see that coming! Amazing idea. The potion is really neat. I can't help but wonder if canon Snape would want to try that with the real Lily after she is dead. What a plot bunny that would be!

    Wow, what agony James and Lily and everyone else must feel having to leave Harry in the custody of Death Eaters, even if they are just like Lily and James. I wondering why the two death eaters are not wondering where their baby Harry is, however.

    Aw, Harry is so sweet! The twinkling dragon eyes was great, both times. It was so sweet when he couldn't find his dragon, but his "grandma" made a new one for him. Cute!

    And YAY! Voldemort is vanquished!! Hip hip horay!!

    I loved the ending of this hcapter, and not just the last sentence. It was a touching scene. :) Great job.

    This chapter was written better than the last one also. :)

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