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Reviews For Harry and the Different Childhood
I'm reminded of that Back to the Future movie when Snape gets ready to show the photograph. :) Ah and Minverva made baby Harry a stuffed dragon! Nice incorporation of an earlier/later activity. I reall yliked how the two Snape's were working so long, instigating each other to work! :) Awww, I liked the last line very much! A chaser, indeed. The only thing that seemed off was how well Harry could speak. Isn't he a baby? Well maybe it's just a description. I don't know babies and their abilities very well. From watching reality tv though, he seems more like a 3 year old to me, usually such terms as "usually". I would have liked more thoughts in this chapter as well. I liked baby Harry, but I wanted to see more descriptions of him. He's cute.
Author's Response: Every child is different of course, but that is about how my children spoke at the age of a year and three months like Harry is here :-) |
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