Potions and Snitches
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Title: The Potters 29 Jan 2008 5:38 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    It's a little strange that Poppy came and didn't notice the two Minervas, like lily and Harry and everyone else did.

    I'm reminded of that Back to the Future movie when Snape gets ready to show the photograph. :)

    Ah and Minverva made baby Harry a stuffed dragon! Nice incorporation of an earlier/later activity. I reall yliked how the two Snape's were working so long, instigating each other to work! :)

    Awww, I liked the last line very much! A chaser, indeed.

    The only thing that seemed off was how well Harry could speak. Isn't he a baby? Well maybe it's just a description. I don't know babies and their abilities very well. From watching reality tv though, he seems more like a 3 year old to me, usually such terms as "usually".

    I would have liked more thoughts in this chapter as well. I liked baby Harry, but I wanted to see more descriptions of him. He's cute.
Title: The Potters 10 Aug 2007 10:06 pm
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter! Please update soon!!!
Title: The Potters 10 Aug 2007 4:19 pm
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    great story... but harry acts alot older than one. he speaks better than my 2 1/2 year old nephew.

    Author's Response: Every child is different of course, but that is about how my children spoke at the age of a year and three months like Harry is here :-)

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