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Title: Sirius and Remus 20 Apr 2021 3:31 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you an interesting story
Title: Sirius and Remus 29 Jan 2008 5:48 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Hehe, Sirius was covered by spinach! I love how Sirius was like, "Maybe things have changed since i was a baby." Hehe. What a joker. I loved that he threw a "quiet" temper tantrum.

    Aha! I have finally discovered the purpose of the "plan" Snape kepts mentioning: If he couldn’t get to the Potters now, he would try something else to get to them; therefore he has to be vanquished in order to really save their lives.”

    I wonder how they will do that.

    Harry is so adorable in this chapter. His poor baby head. I would have liked to see more of Severus platying with Harry however.

    This chapter is better than the last one. As I suspected, you improve with time, like most authors. :) I know that this is an older story. My older stories are not very good! I had to go back and edit my stories because I couldn't stand to reread them! It's interesting how we get better with time, isn't it?
Title: Sirius and Remus 11 Aug 2007 4:14 pm
Reviewer: honore (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonder if Snape and Harry will have a Godfather type relationship if they succeed in saving the Potters or a Guardianship type relationship if they fail.......I vote they succeed though. Looking forward to more. Thanks

    Author's Response: Exactly, Snape will be Harry's godfather in case his parents survive, otherwise he will become his guardian - in the next chapter you will know if they succeed :-)
Title: Sirius and Remus 11 Aug 2007 3:29 pm
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    They should save the Longbottoms while they're at it. It would be cruel to still let that happen without at least trying to do something. Severus and Minerva should tell Dumbledore what will happen to them, at the very least.

    I like your ideas and the story is cute, but I think Harry talks a bit much for a one year old.

    Author's Response:

    They were so fixed on the Potters that they happened to forget about the Longbottoms... a pity, really.... I'm sorry ;-)

    If Harry talks much - he is not just one, but one year and three months - my younger son (he is five now, his brother six) talked much more, not better but more at that age ;-)


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