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Reviews For Harry and the Different Childhood
Aha! I have finally discovered the purpose of the "plan" Snape kepts mentioning: If he couldn’t get to the Potters now, he would try something else to get to them; therefore he has to be vanquished in order to really save their lives.” I wonder how they will do that. Harry is so adorable in this chapter. His poor baby head. I would have liked to see more of Severus platying with Harry however. This chapter is better than the last one. As I suspected, you improve with time, like most authors. :) I know that this is an older story. My older stories are not very good! I had to go back and edit my stories because I couldn't stand to reread them! It's interesting how we get better with time, isn't it?
Author's Response: Exactly, Snape will be Harry's godfather in case his parents survive, otherwise he will become his guardian - in the next chapter you will know if they succeed :-)
I like your ideas and the story is cute, but I think Harry talks a bit much for a one year old. Author's Response: They were so fixed on the Potters that they happened to forget about the Longbottoms... a pity, really.... I'm sorry ;-) If Harry talks much - he is not just one, but one year and three months - my younger son (he is five now, his brother six) talked much more, not better but more at that age ;-) |
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