im so confused on how the ending works..i mean i get it! i do..but at the same tiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiime....... lol
goood work it was great.
Aww, that was so sweet of Sevvie to do for them. Harry was so cute and his baby talk was so adorable :3
I forgot to mention that when chapters are rewritten, I usually reread them and rate them again, as long as I am aware of them. I think that this would be a perfect opportunity to promote this particular story! If you decide to, once you change the summary, redo some of the chapters and get it beta'd again, we can post about it on the groups. I think that your rating will creep up higher. :) It'll be good.
Oh, also: Move the "Completely AU. Pairings: Lily/James, Albus/Minerva.
Beta-ed by Breannatala :-) " in the summary to the story notes area on the table of contents. That's more like important info, than part of the summary. :) Usually such info like that is only given as a sort of warning, but I don't think you should keep yours there.
Here is your summary:
When Harry is found at his relatives, beaten and injured, it is more than potions and magic can heal. Snape decides to try something truly extraordinary to give Harry the childhood he deserves.
A time travel story.
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You should go back and add in more scenes with Harry and Snape in the earliest chapters, make it more apparent just how unhappy and hurt Harry is. Plus, it will add more Snape and Harry interaction which is what anyone on this site craves. :D Good job with this story - was it your first? Congratulations on completing a multichapered one. It's more than I have done.
Awwww!!! What a great ending! That was so good, it made me smile broadly. It was a little short, but it was good. I'm so happy that Lily and James, and Harry are all so happy. I was also happy to see that James didn't fall prey to the DADA curse! I wondered if he would and if Snape would get the girl, but I liked this. I guess with Voldemort's death, the curse he put on the position was killed as well. :)
| Title: Epilogue
| 16 Dec 2007 5:43 am
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| Reviewer: PotterWorm (Anonymous)
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Really unique story. I loved it. (Fitting end to Pettigrew I think. DIE RAT SCUM! It is fitting that he dies the death of his friend.)
Wondeful, just wonderful. I loved it. Thans
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