Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1: Pain 25 Apr 2011 12:14 am
Reviewer: summer (Signed) [Report This]
    I'll just wait and see how this turns out.
Title: Chapter 3: A Conniving Old Man 08 Feb 2009 11:18 am
Reviewer: wout (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is a great begin for a story.
    I would like to know why snape and harry should defeat voldemord together
Title: Chapter 3: A Conniving Old Man 16 Jul 2008 1:12 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    albus dumbledore i am surprised at how slytherin you have become, making a bond on severus and harry, very sneaky of you. How did you manage it without them knowing. great story i'm loving it
Title: Chapter 3: A Conniving Old Man 28 Feb 2008 4:26 am
Reviewer: Emilie D (Signed) [Report This]
    Are you planning to write more of this story? It's a really amusing start and I'd like to read more.
Title: Chapter 3: A Conniving Old Man 01 Sep 2007 6:23 am
Reviewer: honore (Signed) [Report This]
    Impatiently waiting more. Thanks

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Title: Chapter 3: A Conniving Old Man 28 Aug 2007 11:56 am
Reviewer: Viper (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice story. Chapters are a little too short, but it isn't a big deal, because you are updating it quickly. I really like the plot, but I have to say that I knew from the beginning that this bond is Dumbledore's doing:D

    Waiting for the next chapters,
    Viper

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much for your review and your feedback! I appreciate it.

Title: Chapter 3: A Conniving Old Man 20 Aug 2007 10:20 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    I thought Dumbledore was well realized in this given the usual fanon view of him. Harry seemed to flow better, but I just can not see Snape saying "lazy butt." Maybe it's just me. You are doing a nice job for your first attempt at a story. I would suggest you look at some of the web sites that analyze what words Snape actually uses in canon to help you with his characterization. Sorry--I don't have them bookmarked. Just know they exist.
Title: Chapter 3: A Conniving Old Man 19 Aug 2007 7:42 pm
Reviewer: Kristi Parrish (Signed) [Report This]
    LOVE IT!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I appreciate it!
Title: Chapter 3: A Conniving Old Man 19 Aug 2007 6:55 pm
Reviewer: wolfawaken (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very good story, I will be looking forward for more chapters to come.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 3: A Conniving Old Man 19 Aug 2007 8:39 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Pretty good chapter. It seemed a little short though but that's okay. I'm assuming Harry didn't bring his stuff with him so will he (and Snape obviously) make a trip to Privet Drive? That might even help Snape think better of Harry if he learns the boy didn't have a spoiled childhood. Good so far and hopefully more soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing and reminding me about Harry's stuff. I hadn't honestly thought about that. Now I will make sure to include that.

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