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Reviews For To Have a Father
Title: Parlance 01 Mar 2023 11:46 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for the interesting backstory.
Title: Parlance 26 Jun 2019 7:35 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you I love the similarities of this Severus and cannon ones
Title: Parlance 11 Feb 2010 2:11 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    "Hm. That's a good question," hilarious! I think I'll really like this story. I don't like judging too early, you know. 7 so far, I want to see how you do the plot but I think it's going to be really good.
Title: Parlance 19 Jul 2008 3:19 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, I agree about the name change, i usually refer to Snape as Severus in my fics because it makes him sound more personable, or Sev if he's very close with someone, like Lily or a best friend or family member. I like how at least here, Sev can get along with Sirius. I did that in my fic Never Again and it worked out great! And of course, there's no reason why Severus should make it easy for harry to leave, he's got his son back after all!
Title: Parlance 25 Aug 2007 4:32 pm
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter.
Title: Parlance 23 Aug 2007 2:42 am
Reviewer: Emily B (Anonymous) [Report This]
    NAHA i LOVE this Severus Snape! You have to update soon! asap plz! great chappie!

    thanks
Title: Parlance 21 Aug 2007 5:01 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a really interesting twist on the 'Snape-is-Harry's-dad' idea! I love it, and I feel so sorry for Severus. He's mourning the loss of his son, then thinks he's got him back somehow, but Harry isn't really his Harry. That would have to be heartbreaking for him.

    It'll be interesting to see if Harry does decide to stay in this alternate reality or not. Or I wonder if there could be a way to somehow combine them?

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Title: Parlance 21 Aug 2007 2:41 pm
Reviewer: Nicole (Signed) [Report This]
    This fic is amazing! You have a creative idea, for I haven't read anything like this. Brilliant!
    Poor Severus. He must have been missing Harry a lot. Why Harry cannot understand this and just stay here. But I am also looking forward to what will happen to Snape when Harry get back.
    Update soon. I cannot wait to read more!
Title: Parlance 21 Aug 2007 6:31 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah! I liked the change from Snape to Severus- it feels so awkward to me just reading it. Nicely done. Poor Harry. I like how difficult Snape is being. :) Tehe. Thanks for the update! I just wish it were longer! *cry*
Title: Parlance 21 Aug 2007 5:34 am
Reviewer: JLAJ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very interesting so far... keep it up! :)

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