Oh no, I remember this debacle!
Title: Bonding
| 26 Jun 2019 7:57 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you this story gets better and better
Uh oh! Hope they figure out what happened, fast! I like the tension you've built here.
Oh, wonderful plot twist! Really great. I was not expecting that at all. Someone is mucking around with Severus and Harry, aren't they? My money is on Dumbledore, but I can't for the life of me figure out how having the two trade lives will help.
Ahh, c'mon! You can't leave it there. That's completely unfair. This is going to bother me until we get some darned answers here! Lol. I do hope you are able to update soon. However...
In the meantime, I must say that I'm enjoying seeing Sirius as happy and spontaneous as he is. That's the Sirius I've always wanted to see, and it's good to view it in such a way. The story still does have that dampened, dragging sense, though - due to the fact that Harry may or may not be a permanent fixture in this dimension, and it's ever present. So good job on that!
Where could Severus be? Hrmm I suppose that'll be answered next time!
Title: Bonding
| 05 Sep 2007 5:49 am
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Hmmm. What is going on? Is Sev in the other reality?
Title: Bonding
| 05 Sep 2007 5:17 am
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Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous)
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Wow, where did Snape go? Spooky spooky! I can't wait to find out.
Nice chapter! I'm glad that Sirius and Harry got to bond. I liked the undertone of carefulness, of distrust almost, the reminder that they couldn't let anyone in the town see Harry. Nicely done. Thanks for posting!
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