| Title: Snape's Pensieve
| 19 Sep 2007 10:14 am
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| Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous)
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Isn't Lily dead? I thought you already said she was back in the beginning. That'd be an interesting twist, if she turned out NOT to be dead, though. Either way, I'm anxious to see what it was that caused it all to begin :)
Keira
Another excellent chapter. I'm not sure Lily would add to the story, really. The relationship between the three guys is pretty cool in your story. The possibilities with the old Harry and old Snape in the new setting with Sirius are wonderful. Of course, with Harry having found the paper now, I'm not sure any longer that that's where you're going with it. In any case, I like it how it is.
That was a great chapter, I really like the story it's turning out to be great. I hope that Harry decides to let Severus be his Dad in both realities, as soon as they get the right Snapes in their rightful places. Keep up the awesome work, and please update again soon. LES
I think having the improved Severus and this Harry in the universe we know...and leaving bitter Severus with an exculpated cheery Sirius as a roomate and Mrs. Hammond dropping by all the time... would be wonderful justice! Lily is gone to the next great adventure with James, I say leave her there. In both realities she died with him so she is better left dead. Severus will have enough to cope with when the Dark Lord returns.
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