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Reviews For To Have a Father
Title: Surprise 02 Mar 2023 11:42 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh goodness, what a request from Harry!
Title: Surprise 28 Jun 2008 6:40 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter
Title: Surprise 24 Jun 2008 4:56 pm
Reviewer: dracosgoddess123 (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter. just read the whole story in one go and thought it was fantastic. plz update soon.
Title: Surprise 24 Jun 2008 9:15 am
Reviewer: boycrazy30008 (Signed) [Report This]
    loved the chapter update soon..... This story made me cry at parts. Like the arguement that was in the pensieve befpore Harry died..... SOB.... Update
Title: Surprise 24 Jun 2008 8:23 am
Reviewer: Potterworm (Signed) [Report This]
    While I do like this story so far, I'm a bit concerned that Harry doesn't seem at all concerned about leaving Ron and Hermione. Yes, he's friends with them here also, but it is an alternate reality. They're bound to be different also. So, I can't decide whether this is an OOC gapping plot hole, or whether or not it's an issue that will be covered later in the story. Overall, I do still like the story.

    Author's Response:

    Well, I find it a little funny how you pointed that out, considering what I had planned for the next chapter, which should be up by tomorrow.

     Thank you for your review.

     - Katelyn

Title: Surprise 24 Jun 2008 12:00 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! This is an amazing story! It's really weird, and I'm afraid I can't help wanting for Harry to return to his old reality. How did Snape become so rich? And how come Sirius has no money? Is Remus still in this reality, and if so, where is he? Why is Sirius so into Muggle stuff?
    I think the humour is wonderful - just like me and my sisters!
Title: Surprise 23 Jun 2008 1:38 am
Reviewer: Cecilia Farrell1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wouldn't of the two old ladies and the crowd listening, have thought it weird or at least reacted to Harry calling his "father" Severus? Anyway, poor Harry, not sure whether he would of stayed in that reality or not though? Wouldn't of Dumbledore of made a point to talk to Severus before he returned as a contingency plan? you tell him to tell Harry that he must return or that he understands if he wants to stay in that reality and not return? It seems like a thing Dumble's would of certainly done, unless it he had a hand in switching them in the first place. Moreover what did Snape do in Severus' bedroom when he was stuck in that reality? Surely he would of in a fit of temper or disguist ripped up all Harry's cards and paintings leaving poor Severus to come back to find little of his 'real' son's mementos left.
    Okay so i'm rambling. The above prob doesn't make sense. But I do honestly like this story and sincerely look forward to future chapters.
    Cecilia.
Title: Surprise 22 Jun 2008 10:45 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    GREAT WORK!!! I'M LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT UPDATE!
Title: Surprise 22 Jun 2008 10:11 am
Reviewer: darkwish (Signed) [Report This]
    oh my, please don't make harry leave?
Title: Surprise 22 Jun 2008 7:06 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww the kitten sounds cute. Good chapter and I hope you'll be able to update again soon!

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